30-03-2011, 10:45 PM
Helllooo :D deci, am aparut si eu aici-sa :)) ca spun cate ceva despre acest capitol nou si surprinzator pe care l ai scris.
Ma bucur ca te ai hotarat sa l continui si este chiar reusit.
Naratiunea este buna, descrierea la fel, au fost cateva greseli de tastare dar nu erau atat de grave deci nu le am luat in seama. Despre dialog n am ce zice deoarece nu este in acest capitol deci, tot ce mai pot spune este ca abea astept capitolul 2, sa aflu ce se mai intampla si abea astept sa vad cum se regasesc :X
mult noroc
Ja ne! :*
Ma bucur ca te ai hotarat sa l continui si este chiar reusit.
Naratiunea este buna, descrierea la fel, au fost cateva greseli de tastare dar nu erau atat de grave deci nu le am luat in seama. Despre dialog n am ce zice deoarece nu este in acest capitol deci, tot ce mai pot spune este ca abea astept capitolul 2, sa aflu ce se mai intampla si abea astept sa vad cum se regasesc :X
mult noroc
Ja ne! :*
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To the Edge of the Earth, It's a Brave New World from the last to the first
To the right, To the left, We will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth it's a Brave New World it's a Brave New World It's A Brave New World
A Brave New World
The war is won,
the war is won,
a brave new world
I am a simple girl and you're a crazy boy....we can be friends? [+16 / +18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...649&page=1
Inimile noastre bat ROCK [+16/+18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...548&page=1