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Sick independence

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yellaw, merci ca m-ai anuntat. sper sa o faci in continuare pt ca ficul tau chiar imi place. nu prea am vazut greseli de scriere, in afara de chestia aia cu "mama vaduva" dar care a fost amintita. insa ma cam deranjeaza virgulele(eu sunt obsedata de ele) pt ca ai cam prea multe.
in rest e ok si astept urmatorul ca sa vad ce ii face saracului baiat(curiozitatea asta o sa ne omoare intr-o buna zi).
zbye si spor la scris!
"Cum Satana a fost astfel condamnat sa vagabondeze, sa colinde si sa n-aiba deloc stare, el nu are niciun salas al lui, caci desi detine, gratie naturii sale ingeresti, un soi de impertinenta in apele murdare si in aer, asta face totusi parte cu siguranta din pedeapsa ce i-a fost data, cea care il sileste... sa nu aiba niciun loc sau un teritoriu stabil, unde sa ii fie ingaduit sa isi odihneasca talpile picioarelor."
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 19-03-2011, 11:50 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 20-03-2011, 01:01 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 20-03-2011, 01:37 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Biscu' iz back ^^ - 20-03-2011, 11:05 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 20-03-2011, 11:18 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 20-03-2011, 12:27 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Mariah . - 20-03-2011, 12:46 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Freaky - 20-03-2011, 03:38 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 20-03-2011, 03:48 PM
RE: Sick independence - de DeDal N. - 20-03-2011, 04:04 PM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 20-03-2011, 04:33 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 20-03-2011, 05:30 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 20-03-2011, 05:45 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Katniss - 20-03-2011, 07:15 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Sho-Yo - 20-03-2011, 09:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 21-03-2011, 08:20 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 21-03-2011, 09:15 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 21-03-2011, 09:34 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 21-03-2011, 11:17 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 21-03-2011, 11:36 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Rose ^^ - 21-03-2011, 11:40 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 22-03-2011, 12:16 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Katniss - 22-03-2011, 12:34 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Yuki - 22-03-2011, 03:20 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 22-03-2011, 04:26 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 22-03-2011, 04:59 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 22-03-2011, 08:54 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 23-03-2011, 02:20 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 23-03-2011, 08:09 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 23-03-2011, 08:25 PM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 23-03-2011, 09:42 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 23-03-2011, 09:51 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 25-03-2011, 07:12 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 25-03-2011, 09:52 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 25-03-2011, 10:10 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Rose ^^ - 25-03-2011, 10:21 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 25-03-2011, 10:22 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 25-03-2011, 10:36 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 25-03-2011, 11:09 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Daria - 25-03-2011, 11:33 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 26-03-2011, 03:50 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 26-03-2011, 11:14 AM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 26-03-2011, 05:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 27-03-2011, 01:20 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 27-03-2011, 02:51 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 27-03-2011, 04:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 29-03-2011, 09:16 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 07-04-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 07-04-2011, 11:05 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 08-04-2011, 01:14 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Ich. - 08-04-2011, 09:35 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 08-04-2011, 02:53 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 08-04-2011, 06:27 PM


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