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#10
20-03-2011, 04:04 PM
Asa, ca sa nu faci riduri de stres am ajuns aici :P
Pai in primul rand am vazut ca folosesti ghilimea in loc de cratima. Asta duce a limbaj de mess. Si pe langa acest fapt nu arata bine deci daca ai putea sa te dezobisnuiesti ar fi superb. Asa. Intr-adevar, capitolul e prea scurt, nu ca ar fi o mare mare problema pentru mine dar merge sa il faci mai lung. Am vazut ca ai bagat dialog, iti multumesc tare mult :)) ca nu te lasi influentata de ideile acelea ce ma calca pe nervi si spun ca daca folosesti doua sau trei linii de dialog gata, capitolul e cam naspa si acel dialog e sec. Geez. Am sa fac, nu stiu, un protest cu faza asta.
Asa, in rest totul pare in regula. Abia astept sa vad despre ce e vorba in acest nou fic.
Buh Bye !!!
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 19-03-2011, 11:50 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 20-03-2011, 01:01 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 20-03-2011, 01:37 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Biscu' iz back ^^ - 20-03-2011, 11:05 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 20-03-2011, 11:18 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 20-03-2011, 12:27 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Mariah . - 20-03-2011, 12:46 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Freaky - 20-03-2011, 03:38 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 20-03-2011, 03:48 PM
RE: Sick independence - de DeDal N. - 20-03-2011, 04:04 PM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 20-03-2011, 04:33 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 20-03-2011, 05:30 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 20-03-2011, 05:45 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Katniss - 20-03-2011, 07:15 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Sho-Yo - 20-03-2011, 09:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 21-03-2011, 08:20 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 21-03-2011, 09:15 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 21-03-2011, 09:34 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 21-03-2011, 11:17 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 21-03-2011, 11:36 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Rose ^^ - 21-03-2011, 11:40 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 22-03-2011, 12:16 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Katniss - 22-03-2011, 12:34 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Yuki - 22-03-2011, 03:20 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 22-03-2011, 04:26 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 22-03-2011, 04:59 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 22-03-2011, 08:54 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 23-03-2011, 02:20 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 23-03-2011, 08:09 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 23-03-2011, 08:25 PM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 23-03-2011, 09:42 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 23-03-2011, 09:51 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 25-03-2011, 07:12 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 25-03-2011, 09:52 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 25-03-2011, 10:10 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Rose ^^ - 25-03-2011, 10:21 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 25-03-2011, 10:22 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 25-03-2011, 10:36 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 25-03-2011, 11:09 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Daria - 25-03-2011, 11:33 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 26-03-2011, 03:50 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 26-03-2011, 11:14 AM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 26-03-2011, 05:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 27-03-2011, 01:20 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 27-03-2011, 02:51 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 27-03-2011, 04:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 29-03-2011, 09:16 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 07-04-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 07-04-2011, 11:05 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 08-04-2011, 01:14 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Ich. - 08-04-2011, 09:35 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 08-04-2011, 02:53 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 08-04-2011, 06:27 PM


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