Nu ești un membru încă? Înregistrează-te acum!
Creează un cont nou  

We will still be friends forever despite difficulties

#90
Soooo, capitolul asta a inceput tare, ai :))
Bun, Sakura are tot dreptul sa fie revoltata si sa faca scandal. Au incurcat mortul?! Pe bune? Hai sa fim seriosi, cine naiba da o asa scuza pentru asta? A incurcat mortul, nu mai pot de ras.
Si da si Deidara a meritat sa fie luat la rost. Droguri, fufe, cum zicea ea.
Am vazut ca ai folosit ghilimea in loc de cratima, ai grija la scrisul de mess.
Ai folosit la al doilea fragment ai folosit linie de dialog care nu era necesara. Ai legat cateva cuvinte adica ai uitat sa folosesti space si am vazut cateva greseli de tastare.
Bun, in rest a fost un capitol frumos. Chiar ma intrebam cand ai sa pui next-ul.
Buh Bye !!!
[Imagine: ak8THBQ.png]




Răspunsuri în acest subiect
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 31-12-2010, 01:54 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 02-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 04-01-2011, 04:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 09-01-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 13-01-2011, 10:05 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 14-01-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 22-01-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 23-01-2011, 07:56 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 29-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 30-01-2011, 08:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 05-02-2011, 11:14 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 06-02-2011, 11:42 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 11-02-2011, 11:16 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de DeDal N. - 20-02-2011, 09:24 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 20-02-2011, 10:54 PM

Subiecte de discuție similare...
Subiect: Autor Răspunsuri: Vizite: Ultimul răspuns
  [Naruto]  Can you hold my hand I: Forever alone ^Ciresica^ 39 29.342 30-09-2012, 05:56 PM
Ultimul răspuns: ~*Fallen* ~* Angel*~
  A gift forever ... sakura_sasuke 3 3.608 03-12-2011, 11:02 AM
Ultimul răspuns: Flash
  Learning how to love (yaoi + 18 by Kayla. & Bl forever) Kayla. 22 12.033 07-08-2011, 07:39 PM
Ultimul răspuns: HanniGram
  Love forever alice99 7 4.560 24-07-2011, 05:50 PM
Ultimul răspuns: Miranda.
  I walk forever Mada Shine 3 3.486 23-07-2011, 06:28 PM
Ultimul răspuns: Miranda.
  I am a simple girl and you’re a crazy boy….we can be friends? [16+ / 18+] Heartagrama 41 21.467 07-07-2011, 02:58 AM
Ultimul răspuns: Akie
  You and me forever [+18] Nywa 25 24.851 29-01-2011, 05:34 PM
Ultimul răspuns: Nywa
  Rasarit patat cu sange albastru [yaoi by Akadella & BL Forever] akadella 4 3.809 30-08-2010, 02:23 PM
Ultimul răspuns: Mitsukai Yoru
  Lost forever, Love me beat Crazy Person 9 6.279 23-02-2010, 10:03 PM
Ultimul răspuns: Crazy Person
  Lord of the Rings - More than friends? [ Yaoi ] Meal. 1 3.141 29-01-2010, 04:30 PM
Ultimul răspuns: Nidryne


Utilizatori care citesc acest subiect:
15 Vizitator(i)