19-02-2011, 08:38 PM
Hey, am trecut si eu pe aici. Chiar avea chef de un fic nou si interesnt ca al tau. Imi place iar idea mi se pare originala, cel putin eu nu am mai citit despre asa ceva :D
Descrierea este buna, naratiunea la fel iar dialogul nu este sec.
Ma c am lasat in ceata faza cu castelul...dar o sa i dau eu de capat mai incolo :))
Sper sa te ti de fic si sa ma anunti cand vei pune nextul :*
Ja ne!
Descrierea este buna, naratiunea la fel iar dialogul nu este sec.
Ma c am lasat in ceata faza cu castelul...dar o sa i dau eu de capat mai incolo :))
Sper sa te ti de fic si sa ma anunti cand vei pune nextul :*
Ja ne!
To the right, To the left, we will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth, It's a Brave New World from the last to the first
To the right, To the left, We will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth it's a Brave New World it's a Brave New World It's A Brave New World
A Brave New World
The war is won,
the war is won,
a brave new world
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I am a simple girl and you're a crazy boy....we can be friends? [+16 / +18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...649&page=1
Inimile noastre bat ROCK [+16/+18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...548&page=1
To the Edge of the Earth, It's a Brave New World from the last to the first
To the right, To the left, We will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth it's a Brave New World it's a Brave New World It's A Brave New World
A Brave New World
The war is won,
the war is won,
a brave new world
I am a simple girl and you're a crazy boy....we can be friends? [+16 / +18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...649&page=1
Inimile noastre bat ROCK [+16/+18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...548&page=1