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You changed me

Miranda. Deconectat
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#34
08-01-2011, 12:32 PM
Vreau sa fiu prima asa ca o sa editez dupa ce citesc.

Edit:
Nu prea stiu ce sa spun. Descriere exista ,dar nu atat de multa, ar fi trebuit mai multa in momentul in care s-au rentalnit. Ideea se pare ca se intoarce la normal, acum chiar vreau sa stiu daca Karin a nascut. Naratiunea este buna. Actiunea mi se pare putin grabita, nu mult. Dialogul este bun, nici sec, nici mult.
Sper ca comentariul este bun si o sa-ti placa :x:X:x



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
You changed me - de Cookiesor - 23-11-2010, 12:34 PM
RE: You changed me - de Biscu' iz back ^^ - 23-11-2010, 03:55 PM
RE: You changed me - de Moon princess - 23-11-2010, 04:25 PM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 24-11-2010, 10:52 AM
RE: You changed me - de Biscu' iz back ^^ - 24-11-2010, 03:21 PM
RE: You changed me - de Marina. - 24-11-2010, 05:36 PM
RE: You changed me - de Dufresne - 24-11-2010, 07:02 PM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 25-11-2010, 10:02 PM
RE: You changed me - de _Andreea_ - 26-11-2010, 12:05 AM
RE: You changed me - de Marina. - 26-11-2010, 08:39 PM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 27-11-2010, 07:26 PM
RE: You changed me - de Dufresne - 27-11-2010, 08:07 PM
RE: You changed me - de Marina. - 27-11-2010, 08:30 PM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 11-12-2010, 10:21 PM
RE: You changed me - de Marina. - 11-12-2010, 11:09 PM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 14-12-2010, 10:48 PM
RE: You changed me - de Heaven - 14-12-2010, 11:41 PM
RE: You changed me - de Marina. - 14-12-2010, 11:50 PM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 16-12-2010, 12:13 PM
RE: You changed me - de Marina. - 16-12-2010, 07:29 PM
RE: You changed me - de Dufresne - 16-12-2010, 09:42 PM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 19-12-2010, 08:07 PM
RE: You changed me - de Marina. - 19-12-2010, 09:33 PM
RE: You changed me - de Heaven - 19-12-2010, 10:15 PM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 22-12-2010, 06:59 PM
RE: You changed me - de Marina. - 22-12-2010, 11:17 PM
RE: You changed me - de Miranda. - 25-12-2010, 01:14 AM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 25-12-2010, 12:21 PM
RE: You changed me - de Marina. - 25-12-2010, 01:14 PM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 29-12-2010, 02:15 PM
RE: You changed me - de Marina. - 30-12-2010, 11:01 PM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 08-01-2011, 12:02 PM
RE: You changed me - de Miranda. - 08-01-2011, 12:32 PM
RE: You changed me - de Marina. - 08-01-2011, 10:14 PM
RE: You changed me - de Rose ^^ - 02-02-2011, 12:25 PM
RE: You changed me - de Cookiesor - 22-02-2011, 10:10 PM

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