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We will still be friends forever despite difficulties

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Imi lacrimeaza ochii ...:-O
Wow...deci e wow...descrii foarte bine totu` la fel si sentimentele lui Dei ;x . Despre descrierea am zis , ma rog , deci e foarte buna :X Naratiunea ... oi Doamne ce bine narezi ;x si se impleteste cu descrierea ;x Dialogul nu a fost decat aceea liniuta ... acel cuvant care are o uimitoare `putere` care dintr`o stare de amorteala , plictiseala te baga`ntruna de neliniste , disperare :O Vreau sa mentionez ca pentru mine , acel cuvant face tot capitolul :X Greseli nu am vazut xD Chiar imi place cum decurg lucrurile la acest capitol xD si cum se dezvolta ficul xD Deci urmatoarea cred ca e Haku , sau tot tu Dei-kun ? In orice caz va urez amandurora spor la scris si imaginatie >:D<



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RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 31-12-2010, 01:54 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 02-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 04-01-2011, 04:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 09-01-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 13-01-2011, 10:05 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 14-01-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 22-01-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 23-01-2011, 07:56 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 29-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 30-01-2011, 08:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 05-02-2011, 11:14 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 06-02-2011, 11:42 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 11-02-2011, 11:16 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 20-02-2011, 10:54 PM

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