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We will still be friends forever despite difficulties

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Imi intorc privirea in alta parte si o durere de cap ma cuprinde=Imi intorc privirea si simt cum ma cuprinde o durere de cap
isi fucara aparitia=isi facura aparitia
AM vazut doar greselile astea doua. Prima nu e o greseala, dar suna ceva mai bine.
OK, capitolul nu e tocmai scurt. Ma bucur pentru ca ai scris un flashback, eram tare curioasa sa aflu ce se petrecuse acolo.
Ai multa descriere, am vazut pe ici pe colo niste semne de punctuatie puse unde nu trebuia, nimic mai mult. Ma intreb de ce s-o fi prabusit din senin Sakura.
OK, I am waiting for za next. Gambatene and Buh Bye !!!
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 31-12-2010, 01:54 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 02-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de DeDal N. - 04-01-2011, 02:19 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 04-01-2011, 04:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 09-01-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 13-01-2011, 10:05 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 14-01-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 22-01-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 23-01-2011, 07:56 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 29-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 30-01-2011, 08:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 05-02-2011, 11:14 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 06-02-2011, 11:42 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 11-02-2011, 11:16 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 20-02-2011, 10:54 PM

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