27-11-2010, 04:42 PM
@Michiyo: Mda, ii stiu numele. Si in capitolul asta o sa apara o intorsatura uriasa!!! pe celalalt site, titlul era altfel la capitolul asta, dar acum o sa il pun asa ca sa nu dezvalui prea multe din titlu. ;) si o cheama Alice Banner pe fata, am mentionat asta. cat despre cele 2 note proaste, cu unul din useri am vorbit (asta imi place la public pool) si a zis ca a ales asta pt ca nu se da in vant dupa ficurile in engleza, so it's not my fault at all :D
@MiraA: arigatou gozaimasu, Mira-chan!! am editat partea aia, imi scapase. si si eu m-am uimit pe mine insumi cand mi-a venit faza cu heat, pt ca de obicei nu's chiar asa amuzanta, sau asa cred eu...
Here comes the new chapter:
[center]â¤VII.Easy chase[/center]
"The lover is violent, huh?" said Tom, licking the blood off of his lips, relishing the metallic taste.
I wanted to hit him again, but Jake caught my hand.
"Stop it, Josh. I'm hungry. Don't make things worse. Now everything around smells like blood because of you." he said.
"You're right, I'm hungry too. Are we going to eat?" I asked.
"Okay, c'mon."
We arrived in the forest quickly and smelled a deer herd. We followed the scent to track down the herd, soon spotting six does and four bucks.
"Let's take the bucks. Better challenge, with thoes horns. Anyway, bucks or does, deers are the easiest chase." I said, and then, along with Tom, Ben and Jake, I jumped on a buck.
It started moving around like mad, but stopped when I got my fangs into its throat and its warm blood filled my mouth. When we finished...lunch, we went back to the village and then rid on the plains. Of course, Alice and Rebecca were there too.
"Hey, No-Named-Girl! I wanted to ask: what happened back in the town? Did you run away because you were scared?" I asked, sneering.
She did not answer, just thrwe me a scowl and her tongue, then left.
"Oh, God, this girl isn't easy to intimidate." I whispered. "What the heck do I have to do to her to react like the other girls?"
"You know very well that, if you show her what you are, she'll be afraid of you too." Tom said. "But you're a too big of a spazhead and human-lover to hurt her. You know that if you bite her, everything will be different."
"I don't want to bite her! All the humans who found out that I am a vampire are now in a grave!"
"You idiot, you can't even bite her, so there's no way of killing her!"
"Will you please stop bothering me about this?"
"I will bother you until you'll tell Alice that you feel something for her, idiot!"
"Okay, that's enough!" I said and then chased him.
@MiraA: arigatou gozaimasu, Mira-chan!! am editat partea aia, imi scapase. si si eu m-am uimit pe mine insumi cand mi-a venit faza cu heat, pt ca de obicei nu's chiar asa amuzanta, sau asa cred eu...
Here comes the new chapter:
[center]â¤VII.Easy chase[/center]
"The lover is violent, huh?" said Tom, licking the blood off of his lips, relishing the metallic taste.
I wanted to hit him again, but Jake caught my hand.
"Stop it, Josh. I'm hungry. Don't make things worse. Now everything around smells like blood because of you." he said.
"You're right, I'm hungry too. Are we going to eat?" I asked.
"Okay, c'mon."
We arrived in the forest quickly and smelled a deer herd. We followed the scent to track down the herd, soon spotting six does and four bucks.
"Let's take the bucks. Better challenge, with thoes horns. Anyway, bucks or does, deers are the easiest chase." I said, and then, along with Tom, Ben and Jake, I jumped on a buck.
It started moving around like mad, but stopped when I got my fangs into its throat and its warm blood filled my mouth. When we finished...lunch, we went back to the village and then rid on the plains. Of course, Alice and Rebecca were there too.
"Hey, No-Named-Girl! I wanted to ask: what happened back in the town? Did you run away because you were scared?" I asked, sneering.
She did not answer, just thrwe me a scowl and her tongue, then left.
"Oh, God, this girl isn't easy to intimidate." I whispered. "What the heck do I have to do to her to react like the other girls?"
"You know very well that, if you show her what you are, she'll be afraid of you too." Tom said. "But you're a too big of a spazhead and human-lover to hurt her. You know that if you bite her, everything will be different."
"I don't want to bite her! All the humans who found out that I am a vampire are now in a grave!"
"You idiot, you can't even bite her, so there's no way of killing her!"
"Will you please stop bothering me about this?"
"I will bother you until you'll tell Alice that you feel something for her, idiot!"
"Okay, that's enough!" I said and then chased him.