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A story - [+18]

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Insfarsit! Cat am stat pe capul tau ca sa pui nexul. Sunt prima la comm si am sa spun ce am de spus:
1) Prea scurt! Vreau mai mult! Nu ma satur de el!
2) Nu mai folosi emoticoane in fic, nu arata bine, deloc.
3) Ideea cu mingile de tenis m-a dat pe spate, imi place.
4) Mi se pare ca ai facut spam, dar nu sunt sigura nu prea ma pricep la chestiile astea. Trebuie sa ai cel putin 40 de randuri in fic.
Deci astept nexul repede :D Sper sa ai timp destul sa-l continui :D


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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
A story - [+18] - de Zuzy Is Angell - 07-10-2010, 09:37 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Axel . - 08-10-2010, 11:21 AM
RE: A story +18 - de KarinaD - 17-10-2010, 02:08 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Bad Blood. - 21-10-2010, 04:15 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Zuzy Is Angell - 21-10-2010, 09:27 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Who said i have to be normal - 21-10-2010, 09:37 PM
RE: A story +18 - de KarinaD - 21-10-2010, 10:06 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Zuzy Is Angell - 22-10-2010, 09:14 PM
RE: A story +18 - de KarinaD - 22-10-2010, 09:56 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Zuzy Is Angell - 24-10-2010, 03:51 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Miranda. - 25-10-2010, 10:06 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Zuzy Is Angell - 29-10-2010, 11:08 PM
RE: A story +18 - de KarinaD - 30-10-2010, 10:30 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Zuzy Is Angell - 30-10-2010, 10:47 PM
RE: A story +18 - de KarinaD - 30-10-2010, 11:00 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Zuzy Is Angell - 31-10-2010, 04:01 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Zuzy Is Angell - 03-11-2010, 09:38 PM
RE: A story +18 - de KarinaD - 03-11-2010, 10:34 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Dufresne - 05-11-2010, 03:51 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Dufresne - 07-11-2010, 09:26 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Zuzy Is Angell - 09-11-2010, 11:36 AM
RE: A story +18 - de Moon princess - 09-11-2010, 08:11 PM
RE: A story +18 - de KarinaD - 11-11-2010, 10:52 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Zuzy Is Angell - 12-11-2010, 12:25 PM
RE: A story +18 - de Zuzy Is Angell - 12-11-2010, 11:16 PM
RE: A story [+18] - de Zuzy Is Angell - 19-11-2010, 09:37 PM
RE: A story [+18] - de Zuzy Is Angell - 22-11-2010, 10:31 PM
RE: A story [+18] - de KarinaD - 22-11-2010, 11:21 PM
RE: A story [+18] - de Zuzy Is Angell - 23-11-2010, 11:40 AM
RE: A story [+18] - de Zuzy Is Angell - 26-11-2010, 10:55 PM
RE: A story [+18] - de Zuzy Is Angell - 13-12-2010, 12:41 PM
RE: A story [+18] - de Mariah . - 03-01-2011, 04:27 PM
RE: A story [+18] - de Zuzy Is Angell - 23-01-2011, 06:56 PM
RE: A story [+18] - de Zuzy Is Angell - 09-02-2011, 12:44 AM
RE: A story [+18] - de Mariah . - 09-02-2011, 09:47 PM
RE: A story [+18] - de Miranda. - 24-02-2011, 04:59 PM
RE: A story - [+18] - de ciupaciup - 23-05-2011, 06:50 PM


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