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Because we are rebels!

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#12

08-10-2010, 06:52 PM

Jeez ai postat capitolul in sfarsit yepii. Am cazut de pe scaun cand am citit ca fetele iau batut mar pe baieti :)). O Doamne bieti de iei... de fapt... neah. However vad ca ai mai progresat, naratiunea nu mai e alergata desi s-ar fi putut si mai bine iar descrierea este bunicica. Greseli de taste am vazut ceva mai putine decat data trecuta, desi inca "prezente" in fic.Si am mai observat o greseala de exprimare:"cu pantaloni scurÅ£i cu..."- o repetitie care suna ciudat cand citesti propozitia.
I'm here waiting for the new chapter!!! Mai ales ca ma ti in suspans :-w.

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Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 05-10-2010, 10:59 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Kiddoxx. - 06-10-2010, 03:52 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Ada - 06-10-2010, 04:56 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de InocentAngel - 06-10-2010, 08:08 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Shadow. - 06-10-2010, 09:14 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Biscu' iz back ^^ - 06-10-2010, 09:40 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Debb.' - 06-10-2010, 09:44 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 06-10-2010, 10:08 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Axel . - 07-10-2010, 06:12 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 07-10-2010, 11:06 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Kiddoxx. - 08-10-2010, 02:48 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 08-10-2010, 06:52 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de â–Œâ–’ Zà¸¢zzÎ±Î±Î± â–’â–Œ - 10-10-2010, 03:57 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 11-10-2010, 02:31 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Kiddoxx. - 11-10-2010, 03:05 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de â–Œâ–’ Zà¸¢zzÎ±Î±Î± â–’â–Œ - 16-10-2010, 11:30 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 20-10-2010, 11:19 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de â–Œâ–’ Zà¸¢zzÎ±Î±Î± â–’â–Œ - 21-10-2010, 03:30 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 27-10-2010, 08:52 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Shadow. - 28-10-2010, 06:36 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 04-11-2010, 12:15 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 06-11-2010, 10:05 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 10-11-2010, 08:04 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 11-11-2010, 04:40 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Flash - 12-11-2010, 10:51 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 18-11-2010, 09:59 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 18-11-2010, 10:13 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 18-11-2010, 10:18 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 19-11-2010, 04:54 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 19-11-2010, 05:54 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Daria - 19-11-2010, 11:29 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 20-11-2010, 06:17 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 20-11-2010, 10:32 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 20-11-2010, 11:56 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 21-11-2010, 09:52 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 21-11-2010, 12:46 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 22-11-2010, 12:04 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 23-11-2010, 12:46 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 23-11-2010, 04:13 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 23-11-2010, 07:22 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Dufresne - 23-11-2010, 07:44 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 23-11-2010, 08:35 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 23-11-2010, 08:37 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 23-11-2010, 09:02 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 24-11-2010, 10:40 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 24-11-2010, 11:20 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Lilishor - 26-11-2010, 08:13 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 26-11-2010, 08:26 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de â€¢Ð½Ä…ÐºÃ¼â€¢ - 29-11-2010, 11:48 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 13-12-2010, 08:32 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 14-12-2010, 11:44 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 14-12-2010, 04:29 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 14-12-2010, 08:36 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Daria - 16-12-2010, 12:14 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Dufresne - 16-12-2010, 03:52 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 17-12-2010, 04:37 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 21-12-2010, 10:09 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de â€¢Ð½Ä…ÐºÃ¼â€¢ - 22-12-2010, 08:15 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 28-12-2010, 12:10 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 28-12-2010, 12:15 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de crisy_bby - 28-12-2010, 01:00 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Mariah . - 28-12-2010, 01:45 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 02-01-2011, 01:55 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 17-01-2011, 07:00 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 17-01-2011, 07:14 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de â€¢Ð½Ä…ÐºÃ¼â€¢ - 17-01-2011, 07:52 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Mariah . - 17-01-2011, 08:53 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 17-01-2011, 11:27 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Who said i have to be normal - 19-01-2011, 12:18 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 19-01-2011, 01:19 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 19-01-2011, 05:31 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de â€¢Ð½Ä…ÐºÃ¼â€¢ - 19-01-2011, 08:01 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 19-01-2011, 10:08 PM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 20-01-2011, 12:46 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Daria - 23-01-2011, 12:43 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 14-02-2011, 12:25 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de Rose ^^ - 14-04-2011, 11:21 AM

RE: Because we are rebels! - de KiDda - 18-04-2011, 11:20 PM

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