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[Terminat] The Way We Are [yaoi]

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#123

17-07-2010, 07:14 PM

Heeeiizz.
Si eu citesc ficul asta de mult, dar nu aveam cont pana acum.
Imi place foaaarte mult... Dar mai am cate ceva de comentat. Este scris copilaresc in unele parti, iar unele replici par a fi spuse de un copil, nu de un baiat de 20 de ani...
Ai grija la unele expresii, si ai inceput sa omiti cuvinte. Si litere, dar trecem peste...
Apropo...e "fi-ar"...stiu ca suna aiurea...dar "fir-ar" nu prea suna corect...
Si mai incet cu injuraturile...nu prea suna asa bine...
Nu uita de replici! Suna prea...copilaroase...adica suna ca si cum ar fi spuse de un copil de clasa IV... Stiu ca poate uneori asta ati vrut sa reiasa...dar cam bate cam tare la ochi.
Partea aia cu rapitul lui Strif mi s-a parut mult prea ... aiurea ... adica ... uhm ... puteati gasii ceva mult mai ingenios si mai original decat un episod din desene animate... sa-i fi atacat pe strada sau asa ceva...in fine...
Aaaa nu mai stiu altceva ce sa zic...

Doar urari de bine , spor si imaginatie!

Bye hug

[Imagine: Signature__xxxHolic_Yuuko_by_Nanxion.png]

So what, I'm still a rock star
I got my rock moves and I don't need you
And guess what, I'm havin' more fun
And now that we're done I'm gonna show you tonight

I'm alright, I'm just fine and you're a fool
So what, I am a rock star
I got my rock moves and I don't want you tonight

:bv:

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[Terminat] The Way We Are [yaoi] - de Yaoi Queen - 29-10-2009, 09:53 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way we are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaku-chin - 29-10-2009, 10:19 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 30-10-2009, 12:33 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aliss_anime - 30-10-2009, 05:50 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de chrissta - 30-10-2009, 06:56 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 30-10-2009, 10:53 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Kripterya - 31-10-2009, 03:30 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Namine - 06-11-2009, 01:04 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 07-11-2009, 01:05 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 07-11-2009, 01:48 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yukira1234 - 07-11-2009, 04:53 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 08-11-2009, 01:15 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 09-11-2009, 01:13 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 13-11-2009, 11:55 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Namine - 14-11-2009, 12:25 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 14-11-2009, 05:23 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 19-11-2009, 11:42 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Namine - 20-11-2009, 12:17 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 20-11-2009, 03:00 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 27-11-2009, 10:19 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 28-11-2009, 02:42 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de I hate maths. - 28-11-2009, 02:31 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 28-11-2009, 04:59 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 08-12-2009, 11:56 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 09-12-2009, 12:54 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitsukai Yoru - 09-12-2009, 01:58 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ^ToxicK kiD^ - 11-12-2009, 09:42 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Sushiiushii - 11-12-2009, 08:08 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Me†al. - 12-12-2009, 04:22 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 12-12-2009, 10:44 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 13-12-2009, 03:35 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ^ToxicK kiD^ - 13-12-2009, 11:43 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Me†al. - 13-12-2009, 02:12 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de I hate maths. - 13-12-2009, 06:45 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 16-12-2009, 07:53 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 26-12-2009, 12:03 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de adyna_45 - 26-12-2009, 03:20 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ^ToxicK kiD^ - 26-12-2009, 10:37 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ReDsWeEtLoVeAlExA - 27-12-2009, 03:47 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de AyameXx - 28-12-2009, 04:03 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 30-12-2009, 01:17 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 30-12-2009, 12:29 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 01-01-2010, 04:56 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 01-01-2010, 07:13 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ^ToxicK kiD^ - 01-01-2010, 09:36 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de MaDyY - 04-01-2010, 10:27 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Hetalia - 06-01-2010, 12:14 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 08-01-2010, 08:08 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Sol - 08-01-2010, 10:37 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 09-01-2010, 12:56 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Summer - 10-01-2010, 10:03 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nolazy - 17-01-2010, 09:10 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 17-01-2010, 11:17 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 17-01-2010, 11:18 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de AyameXx - 18-01-2010, 12:06 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 24-01-2010, 09:57 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 25-01-2010, 12:56 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaku-chin - 05-02-2010, 05:23 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de -myuu- - 07-02-2010, 12:38 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de AyameXx - 07-02-2010, 03:03 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de -myuu- - 10-02-2010, 11:39 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Me†al. - 12-02-2010, 12:09 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 13-02-2010, 07:47 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de -myuu- - 15-02-2010, 11:31 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaku-chin - 17-02-2010, 10:05 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 18-02-2010, 07:35 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de -myuu- - 20-02-2010, 12:51 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Me†al. - 21-02-2010, 11:06 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaku-chin - 21-02-2010, 10:39 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de -Kanameâ™¥Gackt- - 03-03-2010, 10:45 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 08-03-2010, 02:55 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 16-03-2010, 12:09 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 16-03-2010, 05:58 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de AyameXx - 17-03-2010, 09:31 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 21-03-2010, 01:23 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Denny - 21-03-2010, 08:49 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nemo-chii - 27-03-2010, 08:36 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 28-03-2010, 01:56 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nemo-chii - 28-03-2010, 09:56 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 07-04-2010, 11:14 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 10-04-2010, 10:30 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 13-04-2010, 04:09 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 21-04-2010, 10:46 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de ThorthKa - 22-04-2010, 05:38 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aiumy - 24-04-2010, 12:57 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 25-04-2010, 10:18 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 26-04-2010, 02:42 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 28-04-2010, 05:25 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 28-04-2010, 10:07 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de kame. - 30-04-2010, 10:21 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Mitus - 05-05-2010, 10:28 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nemo-chii - 06-05-2010, 09:37 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 09-05-2010, 01:37 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 09-05-2010, 02:56 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de kame. - 09-05-2010, 04:15 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 13-05-2010, 10:45 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de kame. - 15-05-2010, 07:56 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 16-05-2010, 06:14 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Å¢iuÅŸcÄƒÄƒÄƒ - 18-05-2010, 03:37 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de anime_addicted - 20-05-2010, 08:44 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de BlackBunny - 21-05-2010, 07:43 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 22-05-2010, 11:24 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de BlackBunny - 23-05-2010, 12:04 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de anime_addicted - 23-05-2010, 01:27 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Å¢iuÅŸcÄƒÄƒÄƒ - 23-05-2010, 03:16 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de .B!g BaNg~ - 23-05-2010, 03:47 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 24-05-2010, 11:59 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de nemo-chii - 24-05-2010, 01:23 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 02-06-2010, 12:05 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de .B!g BaNg~ - 02-06-2010, 01:34 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 07-06-2010, 11:38 AM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de kame. - 11-06-2010, 04:03 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de myuu - 16-06-2010, 10:39 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de anime_addicted - 17-06-2010, 02:54 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Î²ÎµÎºi - 17-06-2010, 10:56 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de kame. - 19-06-2010, 12:58 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de BlackBunny - 19-06-2010, 05:27 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Claribel - 09-07-2010, 06:55 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de piper - 19-06-2010, 05:51 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Yaoi Queen - 05-07-2010, 12:21 AM

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RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de Aly - 09-07-2010, 05:14 PM

RE: [*YAOI*] The Way We Are [by Myuu and Kaname] - de BLooregard - 17-07-2010, 07:14 PM

RE: The Way We Are [yaoi] - de Yaoi Queen - 26-08-2010, 12:54 PM

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RE: The Way We Are [yaoi] - de kame. - 27-08-2010, 11:15 AM

RE: The Way We Are [yaoi] - de nemo-chii - 27-08-2010, 06:38 PM

RE: The Way We Are [yaoi] - de DeDal N. - 02-09-2010, 08:26 PM

RE: The Way We Are [yaoi] - de yaoi maniac - 09-09-2010, 03:14 PM

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RE: The Way We Are [yaoi] - de Marina. - 10-10-2010, 02:50 AM

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RE: The Way We Are [yaoi] - de â™¥Green.Irisâ™¥ - 11-10-2010, 08:00 PM

RE: The Way We Are [yaoi] - de sarah chan - 14-10-2010, 03:32 PM

RE: The Way We Are [yaoi] - de yaoi maniac - 28-11-2010, 03:06 AM

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