The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples)

The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples)

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#11

23-12-2008, 09:47 AM

Well... am aterizat si eu, e interesanta ideea, dar e o problema.. sunt ametita rau, in cap imi suna numa' Roro, Hideki, Hiroki... cred ca ai adus prea multe personaje deodata. Puteai sa le introduci macar pe rand...
In schimb mi-a placut exprimarea...
Ai avut unele greseli de tastare, dar si dimensiunile au fost pe masura.
Eu sper sa te concentrezi mai mult asupra personajelor principale si sa mai adaugi pe parcurs altele, ca suntem si asa bagati in ceata...:))
Gambate si ja!

:bye:

The old bastard left his ties and his suit
A brown box, mothballs and bowling shoes

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The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 21-12-2008, 11:54 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de nolazy - 22-12-2008, 12:49 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 22-12-2008, 01:56 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de ArYaNnA - 22-12-2008, 02:20 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de ThorthKa - 22-12-2008, 10:32 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 22-12-2008, 04:03 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Melyeter - 22-12-2008, 05:12 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 22-12-2008, 05:41 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 22-12-2008, 07:21 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de MisS.sAdiStic - 22-12-2008, 08:53 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de bastard_in_love - 23-12-2008, 09:47 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 23-12-2008, 10:59 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 24-12-2008, 02:57 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 24-12-2008, 11:05 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 25-12-2008, 02:01 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 25-12-2008, 03:22 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de bastard_in_love - 25-12-2008, 05:25 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 25-12-2008, 09:50 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de ArYaNnA - 26-12-2008, 11:48 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 26-12-2008, 07:02 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Sol - 26-12-2008, 08:38 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 26-12-2008, 11:36 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Abiyah - 28-12-2008, 04:44 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 28-12-2008, 05:42 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 28-12-2008, 07:39 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 28-12-2008, 09:06 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Abiyah - 28-12-2008, 09:13 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Mitsukai Yoru - 28-12-2008, 10:41 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 28-12-2008, 10:52 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Abiyah - 29-12-2008, 11:41 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 29-12-2008, 12:13 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 29-12-2008, 12:23 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 29-12-2008, 07:10 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 30-12-2008, 02:31 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 29-12-2008, 07:37 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 29-12-2008, 07:55 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de YuuraBo - 29-12-2008, 10:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 30-12-2008, 04:34 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 30-12-2008, 04:46 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 30-12-2008, 05:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Abiyah - 30-12-2008, 09:49 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 30-12-2008, 11:16 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de bastard_in_love - 01-01-2009, 04:42 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 05-01-2009, 09:40 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 06-01-2009, 12:43 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 06-01-2009, 01:21 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 06-01-2009, 04:03 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Abiyah - 06-01-2009, 05:39 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 07-01-2009, 12:14 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 08-01-2009, 08:56 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Selena. - 09-01-2009, 03:48 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 11-01-2009, 09:14 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de YuuraBo - 11-01-2009, 09:38 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 12-01-2009, 01:05 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 12-01-2009, 01:14 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 12-01-2009, 06:12 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 12-01-2009, 11:10 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 17-01-2009, 10:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de YuuraBo - 17-01-2009, 11:27 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 17-01-2009, 11:49 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 18-01-2009, 01:18 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 18-01-2009, 01:52 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 19-01-2009, 04:50 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Yaku-chin - 26-01-2009, 05:20 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 28-01-2009, 04:47 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 28-01-2009, 07:05 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 28-01-2009, 08:38 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 28-01-2009, 11:25 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Abiyah - 31-01-2009, 04:42 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de ThorthKa - 02-02-2009, 08:49 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Ryuu - 07-02-2009, 02:25 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 08-03-2009, 12:12 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Yaku-chin - 08-03-2009, 01:32 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 08-03-2009, 11:46 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 09-03-2009, 08:43 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 15-03-2009, 06:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Yaku-chin - 15-03-2009, 07:17 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 16-03-2009, 12:16 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de chrissta - 29-03-2009, 12:13 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 18-04-2009, 12:38 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Yaku-chin - 18-04-2009, 02:41 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 19-04-2009, 08:32 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 17-05-2009, 05:15 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de I hate maths. - 17-05-2009, 06:03 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 17-05-2009, 10:39 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de chrissta - 18-05-2009, 05:34 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de ThorthKa - 21-05-2009, 06:37 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 22-05-2009, 06:23 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 22-05-2009, 10:23 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de chrissta - 23-05-2009, 09:45 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Dark~Melody - 08-06-2009, 06:12 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Namine - 08-06-2009, 07:11 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 09-06-2009, 10:32 PM

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