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[Terminat] I just wanna love you!

My god! 8 Daca ma gandeam la capitolul anterior ca a fost fucking brilliant, de asta ce sa mai zic! Nu cred ca am mai citit vreodata ceva asa de... nu stiu cum sa-l descriu! Pur si simplu mi-a luat mintile. Sa zic mersi daca apuc sa dorm in noaptea asta pentru ca vreau sa-l citesc din nou si din nou si din nou si din nou.
Dar trebuie sa recunosc ca a fost neasteptat. Finalul ultimului capitol nu m-ar fi dus nici pe departe cu gandul la asa ceva... Inca o dovada a geniului tau (cele anterioare netrebuind mentionate, felul in care scrii vorbeste de la sine). Ray a parut la inceput oarecum brutal, pus pe pedepse, dar s-a rupt ceva in el, instantaneu si totul s-a dat peste cap. Intr-un mod perfect si uimitor. Cat despre Kyle, a fost atat de... din nou, imposibil de descris in cuvinte. Indraznet ar fi mult prea putin spus. A apucat fraiele si sper sa nu le dea drumul, mai ales acum ca Ray a renuntat la masca si i-a aratat se simte.
Nu stiu ce sa mai zic, practic e imposibil sa-ti las un comentariu coerent cand sigurul lucru la care ma gandesc e ca vreau sa recitesc pana imi aduc aminte fiecare cuvant, fiecare sentiment, pe de rost. Vreau sa-mi pot aduce aminte tot oricand imi doresc. Atat de mult mi-a placut. Si desi stiu ca nu prea are valoare, ma simt datoare (fucking rhyme! >.<) sa-ti spun ca, desi nu ti-am lasat decat probabil vreo 5 comm-uri de cand scrii tu ficul asta, mereu sunt prezenta pe-aici si ma delectez cu el. Basically I'm stalking it. You make it just so good.

Cam atat am avut de batut campii ^.^' . Mult succes si abia astept urmatorul capitol.
There's only one way to get rid of temptation, and
that's to yield to it. (Lord Henry Wotton) - Picture of Dorian Gray, Oscar Wilde


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[Terminat] I just wanna love you! - de MiraA - 03-11-2010, 05:23 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! - de yaoi maniac - 03-11-2010, 06:04 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! - de NecroToXyK - 03-11-2010, 06:10 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! - de MiraA - 04-11-2010, 12:17 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! - de NecroToXyK - 04-11-2010, 12:38 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! - de MiraA - 12-11-2010, 11:40 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 23-11-2010, 10:56 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 08-12-2010, 10:32 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 16-12-2010, 06:10 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 28-12-2010, 01:07 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 31-12-2010, 04:23 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 03-01-2011, 10:51 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 04-01-2011, 11:07 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 10-01-2011, 12:18 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 10-01-2011, 07:20 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 19-01-2011, 10:23 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 21-01-2011, 11:20 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 21-01-2011, 11:32 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 28-01-2011, 08:36 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 28-01-2011, 09:03 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 02-02-2011, 04:05 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 06-02-2011, 02:36 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 06-02-2011, 10:45 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 10-02-2011, 11:18 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 19-02-2011, 12:09 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 19-02-2011, 12:30 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 24-02-2011, 11:17 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 24-02-2011, 11:23 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 01-03-2011, 10:40 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 06-03-2011, 11:29 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 07-03-2011, 12:08 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 09-03-2011, 10:46 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 09-03-2011, 11:42 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Sasha. - 14-03-2011, 05:53 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 14-03-2011, 09:25 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Sasha. - 14-03-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 15-03-2011, 10:08 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 23-03-2011, 11:07 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 29-03-2011, 10:16 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 03-04-2011, 12:04 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 11-04-2011, 10:08 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 17-04-2011, 10:01 PM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 07-05-2011, 11:38 PM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 08-05-2011, 09:32 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 14-05-2011, 05:08 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Rain - 14-05-2011, 05:38 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 15-05-2011, 10:29 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 28-05-2011, 10:32 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Rain - 28-05-2011, 12:57 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 28-05-2011, 10:48 PM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 06-06-2011, 10:12 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! - de MiraA - 09-05-2012, 09:46 PM
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RE: I just wanna love you! - de MiraA - 10-06-2012, 01:50 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! - de Rain - 12-06-2012, 12:42 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! - de MiraA - 06-07-2012, 01:45 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! - de rali2009 - 23-07-2012, 12:28 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! - de Beatrix LaVey - 23-07-2012, 02:37 AM
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