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[Terminat] Angel without soul - sez.1

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Buuun, sambata in sfarsiiit! Am timp sa comentez\:d/ pentru inceput... Te-as ruga sa ma ierti ca n-ai vazut un com de la mine pana acum, dar stau prost rau cu timpul si am foarte multe capitole de scris, teme si indatoriri de copil de 15 ani si bla bla.
Ma rog, sa revenim la oitele noastre39
Am vazut greseli de scriere si nu e o mare problema, toti avem, insa eu, fiind perfectionista, tre` sa specific si acest lucru21 Parca am vazut si cateva de gramatica si, bineinteles, virgulitele, dar acolo, spre marele meu noroc, nu e prea mult, deci e ok, timpul le vindeca.
Ce-as putea spune despre continut? 39 Destul de interesant, insa iti sugerez sa nu mai dai enter si sa lasi spatiu dupa fiecare fragment, spatiile se lasa cand lipseste o parte neimportanta din poveste ^^ Iti mai sugerez sa scrii la inceput din punctul cui de vedere povestesti, ca poate mai sunt ametiti care nu stiu [ ma refer exclusiv la mine21:X]
Bun39 Nu-mi vine sa cred ca tipu` a fost violat108 Bine, ar fi putut fi descris mult mai detaliat65 Dar e foarte tare oricum. Chiar imi place ideea si sunt tare curioasa sa vad ce se va intampla in continuare 4
Deci... Bafta la scris hug
"Iadul e gol si toti diavolii sunt aici. " (W. Shakespeare)

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[Terminat] Angel without soul - sez.1 - de Rain - 09-03-2011, 06:00 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 09-03-2011, 08:08 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 10-03-2011, 06:58 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 10-03-2011, 07:53 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 10-03-2011, 10:38 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 12-03-2011, 11:32 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Erion. - 12-03-2011, 04:09 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Sasha. - 12-03-2011, 04:33 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Beatrix LaVey - 12-03-2011, 11:14 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 13-03-2011, 12:03 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 13-03-2011, 09:53 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 13-03-2011, 12:19 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Sasha. - 13-03-2011, 12:27 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 13-03-2011, 04:20 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Yaku-chin - 13-03-2011, 06:13 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 14-03-2011, 05:16 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Sasha. - 14-03-2011, 05:33 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de wonderCaT - 16-03-2011, 01:39 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 16-03-2011, 05:35 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 16-03-2011, 07:00 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Yaku-chin - 16-03-2011, 10:34 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 16-03-2011, 11:35 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 18-03-2011, 08:30 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Yaku-chin - 18-03-2011, 09:11 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 18-03-2011, 10:16 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 21-03-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 21-03-2011, 11:28 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 22-03-2011, 03:05 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Yaku-chin - 22-03-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 25-03-2011, 08:59 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 26-03-2011, 12:16 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 27-03-2011, 10:16 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Erion. - 28-03-2011, 07:30 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 28-03-2011, 08:12 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 28-03-2011, 10:05 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 29-03-2011, 07:32 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 01-04-2011, 02:44 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 02-04-2011, 10:05 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de .Dudiii - 02-04-2011, 12:18 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 02-04-2011, 01:02 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Yaku-chin - 02-04-2011, 02:33 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 03-04-2011, 04:13 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 03-04-2011, 09:09 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 04-04-2011, 10:14 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 05-04-2011, 05:07 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 05-04-2011, 06:22 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 05-04-2011, 07:35 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Yaku-chin - 05-04-2011, 09:20 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 07-04-2011, 09:57 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 08-04-2011, 09:16 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de .Dudiii - 08-04-2011, 10:47 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Ellys - 08-04-2011, 04:06 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Yaku-chin - 08-04-2011, 09:07 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 10-04-2011, 09:25 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de .Dudiii - 10-04-2011, 11:02 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Ellys - 10-04-2011, 11:48 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 10-04-2011, 12:00 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Erion. - 11-04-2011, 05:23 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 12-04-2011, 07:36 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 12-04-2011, 08:32 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Ellys - 13-04-2011, 10:24 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Yaku-chin - 13-04-2011, 11:17 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de .Dudiii - 14-04-2011, 10:51 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 15-04-2011, 03:36 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Aiwendil - 15-04-2011, 03:59 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de .Dudiii - 15-04-2011, 04:29 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 15-04-2011, 09:14 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Ellys - 15-04-2011, 10:37 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 16-04-2011, 05:26 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 18-04-2011, 10:33 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 18-04-2011, 12:15 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 21-04-2011, 02:09 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Aiwendil - 23-04-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 24-04-2011, 10:00 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 26-04-2011, 02:46 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Blue Sky - 26-04-2011, 03:45 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 27-04-2011, 10:22 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 27-04-2011, 05:52 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Aiwendil - 28-04-2011, 12:40 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 30-04-2011, 09:26 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 02-05-2011, 03:32 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Kara - 03-05-2011, 11:56 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 03-05-2011, 10:10 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Aiwendil - 04-05-2011, 10:34 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Tiusca - 04-05-2011, 04:15 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 05-05-2011, 09:03 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 06-05-2011, 11:57 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Erion. - 06-05-2011, 01:12 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Aiwendil - 06-05-2011, 03:48 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 06-05-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 09-05-2011, 08:17 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Kara - 09-05-2011, 09:00 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 10-05-2011, 07:08 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 12-05-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de .Dudiii - 12-05-2011, 06:58 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 13-05-2011, 10:42 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Rain - 17-05-2011, 10:00 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de .Dudiii - 17-05-2011, 11:13 PM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Addeh - 18-05-2011, 09:49 AM
RE: Angel without soul (yaoi,+18) - de Aiwendil - 18-05-2011, 07:57 PM
RE: Angel without soul (+18) FINISHED. - de Rain - 19-05-2011, 05:16 PM
RE: Angel without soul (+18) FINISHED. - de Ellys - 19-05-2011, 06:58 PM


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