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Sick independence

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Am observat ca nimeni nu-ti lasa comm, insa nu am trecunt de asta.
In primul radn e un fic nou, asta inseamna o noua creatie interesanta.
Si pot admite idea ficului e chiar incitanta si interesanta. Ma face sa vreu continuarea si mai mult.

Ok deci am observat ca nu prea ai greseli de nici un fel, imi place ca ai naratiune dar si descriere, nu foarte multa insa e de ajuns incat sa inteleg.
Idea este una pur si simplu geniala, chiar ma duce spre suspans.
Si abia astept sa vad urmatorul capitol, sa gust din urmatoarele tale idei.
Cam atat, inca astept sa vad ce v-a urma.. deci pare ok totul pana acum.

Kiss* Kiss*



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 19-03-2011, 11:50 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 20-03-2011, 01:01 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 20-03-2011, 01:37 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Biscu' iz back ^^ - 20-03-2011, 11:05 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 20-03-2011, 11:18 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 20-03-2011, 12:27 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Mariah . - 20-03-2011, 12:46 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Freaky - 20-03-2011, 03:38 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 20-03-2011, 03:48 PM
RE: Sick independence - de DeDal N. - 20-03-2011, 04:04 PM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 20-03-2011, 04:33 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 20-03-2011, 05:30 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 20-03-2011, 05:45 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Katniss - 20-03-2011, 07:15 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Sho-Yo - 20-03-2011, 09:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 21-03-2011, 08:20 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 21-03-2011, 09:15 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 21-03-2011, 09:34 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 21-03-2011, 11:17 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 21-03-2011, 11:36 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Rose ^^ - 21-03-2011, 11:40 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 22-03-2011, 12:16 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Katniss - 22-03-2011, 12:34 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Yuki - 22-03-2011, 03:20 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 22-03-2011, 04:26 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 22-03-2011, 04:59 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 22-03-2011, 08:54 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 23-03-2011, 02:20 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 23-03-2011, 08:09 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 23-03-2011, 08:25 PM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 23-03-2011, 09:42 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 23-03-2011, 09:51 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 25-03-2011, 07:12 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 25-03-2011, 09:52 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 25-03-2011, 10:10 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Rose ^^ - 25-03-2011, 10:21 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Cloud - 25-03-2011, 10:22 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 25-03-2011, 10:36 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Too Many Dreams. - 25-03-2011, 11:09 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Daria - 25-03-2011, 11:33 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 26-03-2011, 03:50 AM
RE: Sick independence - de wonderCaT - 26-03-2011, 11:14 AM
RE: Sick independence - de oV!K!o - 26-03-2011, 05:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 27-03-2011, 01:20 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Debb.' - 27-03-2011, 02:51 PM
RE: Sick independence - de wasp - 27-03-2011, 04:18 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grella. - 29-03-2011, 09:16 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Hakusor. - 07-04-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: Sick independence - de hiimera - 07-04-2011, 11:05 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Vero - 08-04-2011, 01:14 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Ich. - 08-04-2011, 09:35 AM
RE: Sick independence - de Nixu - 08-04-2011, 02:53 PM
RE: Sick independence - de Grubbie - 08-04-2011, 06:27 PM


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