10-10-2009, 08:14 PM
iiii:X ai venit cu urm capitol :->
well...te descurci de minune sa narezi la persoana 1 si de aceea descrierea,
care este minunata, se imbina superb cu dialogul bine plasat si actiunea care
nu este absolut deloc grabita :X
felicitarile mele :bv:
greseli de tastare nu am ochit :-?
ei bine...pe aici nu prea ai ce comenta de rau, parerea mea :D
spor la scris! :* ast nextu! :X
:bye::bye:
well...te descurci de minune sa narezi la persoana 1 si de aceea descrierea,
care este minunata, se imbina superb cu dialogul bine plasat si actiunea care
nu este absolut deloc grabita :X
felicitarile mele :bv:
greseli de tastare nu am ochit :-?
ei bine...pe aici nu prea ai ce comenta de rau, parerea mea :D
spor la scris! :* ast nextu! :X
:bye::bye:
My fic:
Predestined paths : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13338
[naruto]Teenagers : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13050 (finish
)
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Predestined paths : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13338
[naruto]Teenagers : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13050 (finish
)I wish to meet you again next time
Love is more selfish the deeper it gets
until you want to tie each breath down
unreasonable, yet...
We climb a spiral of light
the red memory is a poisonous tattoo
a tattoo that shows the future's chaos
if we're together, until we shatter
Love is more selfish the deeper it gets
until you want to tie each breath down
unreasonable, yet...
We climb a spiral of light
the red memory is a poisonous tattoo
a tattoo that shows the future's chaos
if we're together, until we shatter