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Predestined paths

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Sunt in trecere pe zup deci m-am gandit sa-ti las com :)).
Imi place actiunea,ca intotdeauna.Decurge bine si nu e grabita.
La dialog ..e bun..
Descriere e buna si ea :)).
In ceea ce priveste sfarsitul capitolului ....da a fost frumos..mie mi-a "sunat " mai mult ca un end de poveste :))....adica as fi vrut sa-l termini cu o intrebare,cu un gand al ei sau cu o propozitie simpla ,dar la tinta care sa ma intrige si care sa ma fac sa vreau sa citesc si mai departe asa cum am vrut pana acum.De data asta nu a fost asa..adica nu stiu ce se va intampla in continuare sau nu vreau sa stiu mai bine zis pentru ca nu am de ce sa vreau..nu e acel lucru care ma face sa vreau nextul..ar putea chiar fi sfarsitul dar stiu ca nu este ..adica se putea deduce ca se intorc si traiesc fericiti pana la adanci batraneti :))vreau sa lasi ca si inainte ceva care sa ma tina in suspans sa nu se piarda acea "placere" de la finanlul fiecarui capitol.
Cam atat.Sper ca nu ai sa te superi de chestia cu finalu.Deci sa nu o iei gresit.Capitolu a fost perfect ca si celelalte ,dar vreau sa introduci finalal incitant ce lipseste.
Ok.Cam atat.
Bye!

JAPAN LOVER ....
TE ADORA :love:



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Predestined paths - de Minnie - 29-10-2009, 09:56 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Berry. - 29-10-2009, 10:33 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 29-10-2009, 11:21 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 01-11-2009, 02:50 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 02-11-2009, 12:01 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 17-11-2009, 08:50 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 23-11-2009, 09:17 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 28-11-2009, 04:21 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 30-11-2009, 03:43 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 04-12-2009, 03:19 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 09-12-2009, 10:24 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 16-12-2009, 07:35 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 16-12-2009, 11:27 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 18-12-2009, 02:20 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 18-12-2009, 02:33 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 18-12-2009, 12:59 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 18-12-2009, 07:40 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 22-12-2009, 11:31 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 23-12-2009, 12:00 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 24-12-2009, 02:51 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 24-12-2009, 11:39 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 26-12-2009, 02:16 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 26-12-2009, 03:54 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 27-12-2009, 12:50 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 29-12-2009, 06:53 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 30-12-2009, 06:01 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 30-12-2009, 11:26 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 02-01-2010, 02:27 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Yuki4ever - 02-01-2010, 08:14 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 03-01-2010, 03:04 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 05-01-2010, 05:40 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 06-01-2010, 11:50 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 09-01-2010, 11:18 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 11-01-2010, 03:19 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 15-01-2010, 09:36 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 16-01-2010, 02:41 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 21-01-2010, 05:39 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 22-01-2010, 06:12 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Khonsu - 22-01-2010, 08:46 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 24-01-2010, 03:21 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 24-01-2010, 04:26 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 25-01-2010, 07:25 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 25-01-2010, 08:46 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 27-01-2010, 01:37 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 27-01-2010, 02:13 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 28-01-2010, 06:41 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 28-01-2010, 06:41 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 30-01-2010, 02:43 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 30-01-2010, 04:37 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 30-01-2010, 04:50 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Lumiere.Kitty - 30-01-2010, 05:57 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 05-02-2010, 09:47 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 06-02-2010, 02:26 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 06-02-2010, 03:22 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 06-02-2010, 08:08 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 06-02-2010, 08:18 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 06-02-2010, 08:53 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 06-02-2010, 09:40 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 08-02-2010, 02:14 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 08-02-2010, 05:07 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 11-02-2010, 08:42 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 12-02-2010, 12:33 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 12-02-2010, 11:11 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 13-02-2010, 12:57 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Lumiere.Kitty - 13-02-2010, 01:58 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 13-02-2010, 04:33 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Yuki4ever - 14-02-2010, 08:21 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 18-02-2010, 04:00 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 19-02-2010, 04:35 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 20-02-2010, 11:20 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 21-02-2010, 08:11 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Mitus - 23-02-2010, 10:13 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 26-02-2010, 04:03 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 07-03-2010, 11:25 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 07-03-2010, 02:16 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 07-03-2010, 07:18 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 07-03-2010, 08:21 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 18-03-2010, 06:48 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 24-03-2010, 10:38 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 05-04-2010, 08:35 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Yuki4ever - 05-04-2010, 10:31 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Looolaaa13 - 09-04-2010, 11:13 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Mitus - 12-04-2010, 03:50 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 13-04-2010, 09:47 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Aly - 15-04-2010, 02:10 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Dreamer - 30-04-2010, 09:11 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 01-05-2010, 09:52 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 20-08-2010, 12:25 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Suicide Thoughts - 01-09-2010, 10:10 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 10-09-2010, 12:12 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Zouly - 17-04-2011, 12:19 AM


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