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Predestined paths

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Pff.....de cand nu am mai trecut pe aici :).....scuze ca nu am mai comentat dar nu am avut timp, am fost prea ocupata cu scoala, dar nu-ti fa griji ca am recuperat toate capitolele

Toate capitolele au fost superbe, actiunea a decurs armonios, nu a fost grabita.....descrierea ca de obicei minunata, ai descris sentimentele personajelor foarte bine :D.....dialogul nu a fost sec si a fost bine pozitionat, unele fraze chiar m-au amuzat mult :)).....narezi super la persoana 1, te-ai implicat foarte bine si se vede ca ai intrat in pielea personajului....Bravo, bravo, bravo!!!

Mi-a placut foarte mult, in sfarsit s-au despartit cei doi, desi nu ma asteptam la asa ceva din partea lui Robert, dar a venit la timp Edi si a salvat-o :X......nu-mi place ca cei doi s-au certat si nu-si mai vorbesc, dar ma bucur ca distanta dintre ei a facut-o pe Alexandra sa realizeze ce simte pentru Edi .....sper sa se impace curand si sa fie din nou impreuna!

Sper sa vii curand cu continuarea sunt foarte curioasa.....capitolele au fost minunate, sper sa mai fie momente intre cei doi :X....Bafta in continuare si mooolta imaginatie...Bye bye :*:*:*



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Predestined paths - de Minnie - 29-10-2009, 09:56 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Berry. - 29-10-2009, 10:33 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 29-10-2009, 11:21 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 01-11-2009, 02:50 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 02-11-2009, 12:01 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 17-11-2009, 08:50 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 23-11-2009, 09:17 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 28-11-2009, 04:21 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 30-11-2009, 03:43 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 04-12-2009, 03:19 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 09-12-2009, 10:24 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 16-12-2009, 07:35 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 16-12-2009, 11:27 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 18-12-2009, 02:20 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 18-12-2009, 02:33 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 18-12-2009, 12:59 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 18-12-2009, 07:40 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 22-12-2009, 11:31 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 23-12-2009, 12:00 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 24-12-2009, 02:51 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 24-12-2009, 11:39 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 26-12-2009, 02:16 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 26-12-2009, 03:54 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 27-12-2009, 12:50 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 29-12-2009, 06:53 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 30-12-2009, 06:01 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 30-12-2009, 11:26 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 02-01-2010, 02:27 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Yuki4ever - 02-01-2010, 08:14 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 03-01-2010, 03:04 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 05-01-2010, 05:40 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 06-01-2010, 11:50 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 09-01-2010, 11:18 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 11-01-2010, 03:19 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 15-01-2010, 09:36 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 16-01-2010, 02:41 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 21-01-2010, 05:39 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 22-01-2010, 06:12 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Khonsu - 22-01-2010, 08:46 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 24-01-2010, 03:21 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 24-01-2010, 04:26 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 25-01-2010, 07:25 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 25-01-2010, 08:46 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 27-01-2010, 01:37 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 27-01-2010, 02:13 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 28-01-2010, 06:41 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 28-01-2010, 06:41 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 30-01-2010, 02:43 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 30-01-2010, 04:37 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Blue Bluegen - 30-01-2010, 04:50 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Lumiere.Kitty - 30-01-2010, 05:57 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 05-02-2010, 09:47 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 06-02-2010, 02:26 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 06-02-2010, 03:22 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 06-02-2010, 08:08 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 06-02-2010, 08:18 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 06-02-2010, 08:53 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 06-02-2010, 09:40 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 08-02-2010, 02:14 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 08-02-2010, 05:07 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 11-02-2010, 08:42 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 12-02-2010, 12:33 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 12-02-2010, 11:11 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 13-02-2010, 12:57 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Lumiere.Kitty - 13-02-2010, 01:58 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 13-02-2010, 04:33 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Yuki4ever - 14-02-2010, 08:21 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 18-02-2010, 04:00 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 19-02-2010, 04:35 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de marya - 20-02-2010, 11:20 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 21-02-2010, 08:11 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Mitus - 23-02-2010, 10:13 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 26-02-2010, 04:03 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 07-03-2010, 11:25 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 07-03-2010, 02:16 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Bambilici - 07-03-2010, 07:18 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 07-03-2010, 08:21 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 18-03-2010, 06:48 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Japan Lover - 24-03-2010, 10:38 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 05-04-2010, 08:35 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Yuki4ever - 05-04-2010, 10:31 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Looolaaa13 - 09-04-2010, 11:13 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Mitus - 12-04-2010, 03:50 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Fifilina - 13-04-2010, 09:47 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Aly - 15-04-2010, 02:10 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Dreamer - 30-04-2010, 09:11 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Sushiiushii - 01-05-2010, 09:52 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 20-08-2010, 12:25 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Suicide Thoughts - 01-09-2010, 10:10 PM
RE: Predestined paths - de Minnie - 10-09-2010, 12:12 AM
RE: Predestined paths - de Zouly - 17-04-2011, 12:19 AM


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