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Our Game

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Heya XD Bun deci ma bucur ca am gasit un fic yaoi nou pe aici si... ce fic! Si chiar voiam sa citesc ceva de genul mpreg. Stau mai prost uneori cu engleza. Greseli ai avaut vreo... 3 daca nu ma insel. Asa... titlul imi place mult de tot. Defapt tot ce ai asternut acolo mi-a placut foarte mult. Ideea este super buna si nu am mai vazut ceva de genul pe aici. Imi place felul in care scrii. Yup imi place la toti defapt. Doamne deci... am ramas eu WTF? O.o La faza cu tarfulita. Si cu banii... off. Sper ca in urmatorul capitol sa afle ala ca nu a fost ceea ce parea. Stai... a ejaculat? A uitat si de problema sa asta? Eh.. ce sa ii fac, asta dovedeste ca il iubeste pe tipul ala. Hmm... de aici ramane insarcinat? Sau mai incolo? Aflu eu pe parcurs. Imi place ca ai scris si varsta, si niste detalii despre fiecare in parte. Asta credema, ajuta cititorul sa cunoasca mai bine personajul sau sa isi inchipuie mai bine scenele de sex (in cazul meu). Si inca odata... WTF? O.o Primul tau fic? Am vazut scriitori la al 10-lea si sunt varza. Hmm... nu mai am ce zice, deoarece totul mi se pare absolut perfect.

Icrefakingdibil inceput si capitol si succes in continuare :bv:



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Our Game - de Denny - 03-09-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Piersicuta - 31-12-2011, 05:45 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Kimera - 01-01-2012, 10:16 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Denny - 02-01-2012, 12:55 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de dot dot curve :) - 02-01-2012, 10:56 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Kimera - 02-01-2012, 02:09 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Zyklon - 02-01-2012, 11:37 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Piersicuta - 02-01-2012, 01:53 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alistar - 02-01-2012, 04:44 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alle|X|Andra - 04-01-2012, 10:50 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Death Rose - 05-01-2012, 10:23 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de βεκi - 07-01-2012, 02:26 PM
RE: Our Game - de Denny - 29-01-2012, 09:10 PM
RE: Our Game - de Kimera - 30-01-2012, 08:59 PM
RE: Our Game - de AbiiShu' - 30-01-2012, 06:55 PM
RE: Our Game - de Alistar - 31-01-2012, 02:28 AM
RE: Our Game - de Denny - 02-08-2012, 03:30 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de AbiiShu' - 02-08-2012, 06:25 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de Lexxu - 03-08-2012, 06:45 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de Denny - 20-08-2012, 02:15 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de Lexxu - 20-08-2012, 03:21 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 03-09-2011, 11:05 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 04-09-2011, 04:03 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 04-09-2011, 10:13 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 05-09-2011, 11:08 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 06-09-2011, 12:06 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 06-09-2011, 12:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 06-09-2011, 12:57 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 06-09-2011, 02:58 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 06-09-2011, 02:58 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 06-09-2011, 09:23 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de HanniGram - 06-09-2011, 09:28 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 06-09-2011, 10:09 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Alicia - 09-09-2011, 10:18 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 09-09-2011, 11:46 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 10-09-2011, 12:23 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 10-09-2011, 11:49 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 10-09-2011, 03:07 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 10-09-2011, 04:56 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 10-09-2011, 05:57 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 10-09-2011, 07:57 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Alicia - 12-09-2011, 02:15 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 15-09-2011, 04:17 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 15-09-2011, 04:36 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 15-09-2011, 11:07 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de sarah chan - 18-09-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 19-09-2011, 07:35 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 19-09-2011, 08:05 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 23-09-2011, 08:46 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 23-09-2011, 09:02 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 24-09-2011, 10:24 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 24-09-2011, 12:19 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Yaku-chin - 26-09-2011, 10:46 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 27-09-2011, 08:37 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 28-09-2011, 08:50 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 03-10-2011, 10:07 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 04-10-2011, 05:04 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 05-10-2011, 08:48 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 06-10-2011, 08:45 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 06-10-2011, 02:51 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 07-10-2011, 03:11 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 08-10-2011, 12:33 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de AyameXx - 08-10-2011, 03:39 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 08-10-2011, 09:34 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 08-10-2011, 11:11 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 08-10-2011, 12:45 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Yaku-chin - 08-10-2011, 01:28 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 08-10-2011, 02:25 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 08-10-2011, 09:38 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 16-10-2011, 10:28 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de sarah chan - 16-10-2011, 11:17 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de AyameXx - 17-10-2011, 03:36 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 17-10-2011, 03:41 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 17-10-2011, 04:45 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 17-10-2011, 11:29 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 18-10-2011, 03:05 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Yaku-chin - 18-10-2011, 09:27 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 24-10-2011, 07:45 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 24-10-2011, 07:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 24-10-2011, 07:51 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 25-10-2011, 09:31 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 25-10-2011, 10:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de sarah chan - 30-10-2011, 01:41 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 30-10-2011, 10:17 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de n{iK}a aMmA - 31-10-2011, 12:02 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 31-10-2011, 09:30 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 31-10-2011, 04:15 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 31-10-2011, 05:53 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 31-10-2011, 06:31 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 01-11-2011, 11:48 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de AyameXx - 01-11-2011, 11:39 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 08-11-2011, 09:14 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 09-11-2011, 10:08 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 09-11-2011, 10:19 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 10-11-2011, 04:59 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 11-11-2011, 09:03 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Nirv - 11-11-2011, 09:43 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 13-11-2011, 07:21 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 13-11-2011, 08:19 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 21-11-2011, 04:16 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 21-11-2011, 04:34 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 22-11-2011, 09:38 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Nirv - 22-11-2011, 08:34 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Alle|X|Andra - 22-11-2011, 11:01 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 25-11-2011, 03:11 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 26-11-2011, 09:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Luzer - 30-11-2011, 09:09 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de n{iK}a aMmA - 04-12-2011, 10:57 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 04-12-2011, 11:41 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 05-12-2011, 01:00 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 05-12-2011, 03:59 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 05-12-2011, 07:24 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de n{iK}a aMmA - 10-12-2011, 03:25 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alle|X|Andra - 10-12-2011, 05:40 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Nirv - 11-12-2011, 05:11 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Denny - 13-12-2011, 01:27 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Zyklon - 13-12-2011, 04:21 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de n{iK}a aMmA - 13-12-2011, 04:37 PM
[split] [+18] Our Game - de Nirv - 13-12-2011, 10:13 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alle|X|Andra - 13-12-2011, 11:59 PM


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