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One love pleasures more

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buna..imi place ficul tau,mi se pare original,iar rolul in care le-ai pus pe personaje.Sakura rea si increzuta,iar Sasuke niciodata nu as fi crezut ca ar da intr-o fata mai ales in Sakura.Imi place.
Titlul imi place,chiar atrage atentia,mai ales ca e scris si in engleza.
Descrierea e buna,dar ai putea sa descri mai bine sentimentele Sakurei sau ale lui Sasuke.
Imi place cum narezi,dialogul este destul de bun dupa parerea mea.
Actiunea mi se pare putin cam grabita dar imi place..
Astept sa pui nextu si te rog mult sa ma anunti si pe mine!
Spor la scris!
Byee..!!!:*>:d<
...Kiss me...
...Love me...
...Suck me...

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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
One love pleasures more - de Zummy - 31-05-2011, 10:00 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 01-06-2011, 07:37 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de AyumiHamasaki - 02-06-2011, 08:01 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 02-06-2011, 09:59 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 03-06-2011, 06:14 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Flash - 03-06-2011, 08:36 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Zummy - 06-06-2011, 09:11 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 06-06-2011, 09:40 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 08-06-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de DiamondZ - 13-06-2011, 01:02 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de AyumiHamasaki - 14-06-2011, 05:21 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rena - 14-06-2011, 06:07 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de DiamondZ - 14-06-2011, 08:58 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 14-06-2011, 09:11 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Zummy - 15-06-2011, 11:01 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 16-06-2011, 06:52 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 17-06-2011, 11:59 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de tamoshiku - 24-06-2011, 10:43 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de DiamondZ - 24-06-2011, 10:55 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 25-06-2011, 10:30 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rena - 25-06-2011, 01:50 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Candy_Girl_Love. - 25-06-2011, 02:07 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Alicia - 25-06-2011, 05:50 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 27-06-2011, 10:23 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Zummy - 05-07-2011, 06:25 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 05-07-2011, 07:46 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de DiamondZ - 06-07-2011, 11:48 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 07-07-2011, 10:41 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de AyumiHamasaki - 16-07-2011, 01:05 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Candy_Girl_Love. - 17-07-2011, 12:11 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Zummy - 17-07-2011, 06:16 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 19-07-2011, 10:00 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de DiamondZ - 20-07-2011, 04:11 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rena - 26-07-2011, 08:19 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de AyumiHamasaki - 30-07-2011, 11:05 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 31-07-2011, 10:20 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 05-08-2011, 07:23 PM


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