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One love pleasures more

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Buna,
In primul rand sa nu fiu nerecunoscatoare o sa'ti zic un simplu si umil multumesc! In al doilea rand fic;ul: Descrierea merge dar putea si mai bine, ca si la mine. Actiunea .... pai mie una mi s'a parut ok. Dialopgul nu foooarte lung si nu a fost sec. Greseli au fost dar insignifiante. Fara alte lungiri si prelungiri as dori sa te anunt ca doresc sa aduci continuarea mai repede.
Spor la scris si moolta inspiratie!



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
One love pleasures more - de Zummy - 31-05-2011, 10:00 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 01-06-2011, 07:37 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de AyumiHamasaki - 02-06-2011, 08:01 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 02-06-2011, 09:59 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 03-06-2011, 06:14 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Flash - 03-06-2011, 08:36 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Zummy - 06-06-2011, 09:11 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 06-06-2011, 09:40 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 08-06-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de DiamondZ - 13-06-2011, 01:02 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de AyumiHamasaki - 14-06-2011, 05:21 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rena - 14-06-2011, 06:07 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de DiamondZ - 14-06-2011, 08:58 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 14-06-2011, 09:11 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Zummy - 15-06-2011, 11:01 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 16-06-2011, 06:52 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 17-06-2011, 11:59 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de tamoshiku - 24-06-2011, 10:43 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de DiamondZ - 24-06-2011, 10:55 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 25-06-2011, 10:30 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rena - 25-06-2011, 01:50 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Candy_Girl_Love. - 25-06-2011, 02:07 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Alicia - 25-06-2011, 05:50 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 27-06-2011, 10:23 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Zummy - 05-07-2011, 06:25 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 05-07-2011, 07:46 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de DiamondZ - 06-07-2011, 11:48 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 07-07-2011, 10:41 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de AyumiHamasaki - 16-07-2011, 01:05 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Candy_Girl_Love. - 17-07-2011, 12:11 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Zummy - 17-07-2011, 06:16 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 19-07-2011, 10:00 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de DiamondZ - 20-07-2011, 04:11 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rena - 26-07-2011, 08:19 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de AyumiHamasaki - 30-07-2011, 11:05 PM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Sho-Yo - 31-07-2011, 10:20 AM
RE: One love pleasures more - de Rose ^^ - 05-08-2011, 07:23 PM


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