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Need for speed

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Oh ...ce vad eu aici: e un fic nou ...hai sa-mi dau cu parerea despre el :))

No 1: titlul : Need for speed ( NFS) : ma duce cu gandul la un joc pe care colega mea il are pe PSP ( ceea ce nu e bine) , insa imi aminteste de obsesia mea pentru viteza ceea ce e super.
No 2 : modurile de expunere sunt exact asa cum trebuie ( dupa parerea mea , daca ai fi avut mai multa ar fi fost deranjant)
No 3 : personajele sunt bine conturate pentru un prim capitol . ( btw ii inteleg atractia lui Ary fata de al sau Kawasaki Ninja - eu sunt fana infocata a acestui motor)
No 4 : Ai avut cateva greselute de scriere , insa nu moare nimeni din cauza asta .

Deeeci ....ficul imi place la nebunie , asa ca as fi recunoscatoare daca m-ai anunta si pe mine cand postezi urmatoarele capitole :D
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Tnx Nibbles


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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Need for speed - de Nywa - 13-08-2011, 10:13 PM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de Drama Queen - 13-08-2011, 10:46 PM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de HanniGram - 14-08-2011, 09:16 AM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de alexutzy97 - 14-08-2011, 05:45 PM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de Nywa - 15-08-2011, 10:25 PM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de Drama Queen - 16-08-2011, 09:56 AM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de HanniGram - 16-08-2011, 01:25 PM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de Nywa - 03-09-2011, 10:49 PM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de Nywa - 16-09-2011, 03:38 PM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de Beatrix LaVey - 18-09-2011, 09:03 PM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de Nywa - 30-09-2011, 08:46 PM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de Nywa - 27-10-2011, 04:44 PM
RE: Need for speed [Yaoi +18] - de Nywa - 26-11-2011, 10:43 PM
RE: [yaoi] Need for speed - de Nywa - 09-12-2011, 10:08 PM
RE: [yaoi] Need for speed - de Kimera - 10-12-2011, 07:45 PM
RE: [yaoi] Need for speed - de Nywa - 24-12-2011, 07:36 PM
RE: [yaoi] Need for speed - de dot dot curve :) - 26-12-2011, 02:07 PM
RE: [yaoi] Need for speed - de Nywa - 07-01-2012, 05:06 PM
RE: Need for speed - de Nywa - 22-01-2012, 07:22 PM
RE: Need for speed - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 22-01-2012, 11:17 PM
RE: Need for speed - de Nywa - 28-01-2012, 05:49 PM
RE: Need for speed - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 28-01-2012, 11:28 PM
RE: Need for speed - de AbiiShu' - 01-02-2012, 06:38 PM
RE: Need for speed - de Nywa - 18-02-2012, 10:42 AM
RE: Need for speed - de AbiiShu' - 19-02-2012, 07:00 PM
RE: Need for speed - de Nywa - 01-03-2012, 08:48 PM
RE: Need for speed - de AbiiShu' - 04-03-2012, 12:13 PM
RE: Need for speed - de Nywa - 11-03-2012, 12:59 PM
RE: Need for speed - de Nywa - 25-03-2012, 05:27 PM
RE: Need for speed - de Nywa - 08-04-2012, 01:15 PM
RE: Need for speed - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 08-04-2012, 09:56 PM

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