Jail is my home

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[Naruto] Jail is my home

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#26

12-08-2011, 09:48 PM

Hello.
Ce pot sa-ti spun m-ai surpins foarte placut. Ma bucur ca nu ai mai lasat asa mult spatiu acum arata mult mai bine.
Mi-a placut cum l-ai descris pe Naruto chiar daca a fost putin... cam ciudat dupa parerea mea. Mai ai putin de lucrat la descrierea sentimentelor, incerca sa conturezi mai bine personajele din punct de vedere al gandurilor/faptelor etc.
Actiunea a fost buna, nu te-ai grabit deloc iar dialogul a fost ok, nu a fost plictisitor si nici nu ai pus fraze inutile.
Deci te astept cu next.
Bye.

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Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 31-07-2011, 10:15 PM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de hiimera - 01-08-2011, 09:06 AM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de crazy little red - 01-08-2011, 12:38 PM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Search - 01-08-2011, 12:43 PM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de hiimera - 01-08-2011, 01:06 PM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 01-08-2011, 01:51 PM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Twisty Emerald - 02-08-2011, 06:42 PM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 03-08-2011, 12:28 AM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de crazy little red - 03-08-2011, 11:07 AM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de hiimera - 03-08-2011, 11:30 AM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Mina-chan - 03-08-2011, 01:26 PM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 03-08-2011, 10:47 PM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 04-08-2011, 12:34 AM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Search - 04-08-2011, 11:46 AM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 05-08-2011, 05:10 PM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Search - 05-08-2011, 05:37 PM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 05-08-2011, 08:56 PM

RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 05-08-2011, 08:58 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 10-08-2011, 02:34 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Mina-chan - 10-08-2011, 03:49 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 10-08-2011, 08:14 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Yuki4ever - 10-08-2011, 10:45 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 12-08-2011, 12:27 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 12-08-2011, 05:34 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Yuki4ever - 12-08-2011, 09:39 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Mina-chan - 12-08-2011, 09:48 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 16-08-2011, 10:37 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Yuki4ever - 17-08-2011, 12:17 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Zummy - 17-08-2011, 12:28 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 18-08-2011, 10:14 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Yuki4ever - 18-08-2011, 10:39 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Zummy - 18-08-2011, 10:44 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Mina-chan - 18-08-2011, 11:02 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 19-08-2011, 12:28 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Twisty Emerald - 19-08-2011, 01:32 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 02-09-2011, 11:11 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 02-09-2011, 11:33 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Twisty Emerald - 03-09-2011, 01:12 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Yuki4ever - 04-09-2011, 01:45 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 10-09-2011, 12:12 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 10-09-2011, 12:34 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Zummy - 10-09-2011, 08:12 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 17-09-2011, 06:43 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Search - 29-09-2011, 06:10 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 01-10-2011, 12:24 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 01-10-2011, 02:32 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Mina-chan - 01-10-2011, 10:18 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de i Ramenn. - 02-10-2011, 03:40 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Twisty Emerald - 03-10-2011, 05:18 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [Konan X Pain+18] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 25-10-2011, 10:50 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [Konan X Pain+18] - de i Ramenn. - 26-10-2011, 09:27 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [Konan X Pain+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 27-10-2011, 07:48 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [Konan X Pain+18] - de Miranda. - 09-11-2011, 12:56 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [Konan X Pain+18] - de SnowFlake. - 11-11-2011, 11:49 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [Konan X Pain+18] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 18-12-2011, 03:33 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [Konan X Pain+18] - de Miranda. - 18-12-2011, 04:02 AM

RE: Jail is my... home [Konan X Pain+18] - de SnowFlake. - 19-12-2011, 12:06 PM

RE: Jail is my... home [Konan X Pain+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 19-12-2011, 03:23 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 20-02-2012, 11:43 AM

RE: Jail is my home - de Zummy - 14-03-2012, 10:44 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de DiZ - 10-05-2012, 11:15 AM

RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 13-05-2012, 03:36 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de ^Ciresica^ - 13-05-2012, 09:22 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 22-07-2012, 01:21 AM

RE: Jail is my home - de Erina Ozaki - 29-07-2012, 01:47 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de rovy - 12-11-2012, 06:36 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de MadalinaMada - 30-11-2012, 11:38 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 01-12-2012, 10:08 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de ^Ciresica^ - 01-12-2012, 11:46 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de Erina Ozaki - 10-01-2013, 07:47 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 21-03-2013, 05:35 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 11-06-2013, 09:56 PM

RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 21-08-2013, 01:14 PM

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