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Dark~Melody
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#137
18-06-2009, 08:59 PM
:o3 :o3 So sweet...Nu vreau ca Sasuke sa moara!!!Nu-i corect!!Chiar daca il urasc pentru ce i-a facut Sakurei, tot nu vreau sa moara...:(( Te rog Lye sa nu-l omori...Sakura trebuie sa faca ceva, sa foloseasca un semn ceva...sa aiba din nou putere...In rest descriere, naratiune, dialog sunt toate prezente si bine proportionate.Am fost prea prinsa in poveste...
Astept urmatorul capitol cat mai repede.Spor la scris in continuare!Kisses and hugs!Bye!



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