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Money vs. Love +18

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*Chuu*
Esti buna la ficuri!
Adica, am mai intalnit pe cineva dar si pe tine!
Te descursi bine!Dar nu pot spune ca ai un fic perfect pentru ca stiu foarte bine ca nu poate sa existe.Da, probabil sunt cateva fisuri in ficul tau pe care cred ca nu le-am observat (neatentia asta..ce sa-i faci? :)) )
Mda esti cu greselile alea de tastare si pleonasme!
Am vazut in cateva capitole fraza gen: cobora jos (nu poti cobora in sus asa ca...)
In rest daca observ ceva nu o sa ezit sa te anunt.Deocamdata iti spune doar: Spor la scris!
Ja ne..
*Chuu*
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 20-09-2009, 03:34 AM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de Alexi - 20-09-2009, 09:20 AM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 20-09-2009, 06:40 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de A'Svear - 20-09-2009, 09:19 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 21-09-2009, 10:29 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 22-09-2009, 10:56 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de Alexi - 23-09-2009, 06:26 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 25-09-2009, 08:25 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 27-09-2009, 11:00 AM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de D@n@ - 27-09-2009, 12:13 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 29-09-2009, 10:09 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de DeathRebel - 30-09-2009, 02:54 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de Shadow. - 30-09-2009, 08:53 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 30-09-2009, 09:53 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de Alexi - 02-10-2009, 04:46 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 04-10-2009, 10:00 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de morfo - 04-10-2009, 10:21 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 09-10-2009, 09:05 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 17-10-2009, 07:00 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 24-10-2009, 04:52 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 08-11-2009, 02:00 AM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de Whisper - 08-11-2009, 06:33 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de "~Setsuna~Noelle~" - 08-11-2009, 08:24 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 15-11-2009, 08:21 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de Angel~Of~Dark - 15-11-2009, 08:37 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de Alexi - 15-11-2009, 08:42 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 29-11-2009, 12:25 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de Erina Ozaki - 29-11-2009, 07:11 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de Isa-chan - 04-12-2009, 03:12 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 16-12-2009, 07:03 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 29-12-2009, 03:33 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de Miauu - 04-01-2010, 12:21 AM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 23-01-2010, 12:59 AM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de Miauu - 23-01-2010, 11:31 AM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de Bambilici - 23-01-2010, 12:56 PM

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