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Mirror of love

#60
Citat:ochi mei aveau o luminita ciudata ,

iar lacrimile erau gata sa-mi inunde

ochi..
Repetitie

ochi- ochii *in ambele cazuri

ram-raman
obraji- obrajii
parinti- parintii

Again, un capitol scurt...un capitol cam prea scurt parca.
Vad ca ai probleme cu pluralul si ai treut destul de repede de la discutia dintre cei doi si telefonul ce urma.

In rest totul pare in regula..astept nextul, succes!



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 03:17 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 18-04-2009, 03:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 03:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 18-04-2009, 04:29 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 04:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 18-04-2009, 06:21 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mischa - 18-04-2009, 07:59 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 18-04-2009, 08:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 09:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 18-04-2009, 09:35 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 18-04-2009, 10:44 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 10:56 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 19-04-2009, 10:37 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 11:53 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 19-04-2009, 08:47 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 09:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 19-04-2009, 10:15 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 10:18 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 19-04-2009, 11:15 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 20-04-2009, 09:30 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 11:46 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de |~ReFLuXy~| - 20-04-2009, 12:05 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 20-04-2009, 12:23 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 02:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 20-04-2009, 02:25 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 02:32 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 20-04-2009, 07:42 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de |~ReFLuXy~| - 20-04-2009, 07:47 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 20-04-2009, 08:10 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 09:13 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 21-04-2009, 10:54 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 04:45 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 21-04-2009, 04:50 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 21-04-2009, 05:00 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 21-04-2009, 05:05 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 21-04-2009, 05:51 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 06:10 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 21-04-2009, 07:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 07:51 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 21-04-2009, 08:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 08:30 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 10:30 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 10:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 10:45 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 21-04-2009, 11:14 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 22-04-2009, 08:37 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 22-04-2009, 08:53 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 22-04-2009, 03:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 22-04-2009, 03:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 22-04-2009, 05:06 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 22-04-2009, 05:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 22-04-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 22-04-2009, 06:32 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 22-04-2009, 07:06 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 24-04-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 24-04-2009, 07:18 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mabel - 24-04-2009, 09:17 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 25-04-2009, 03:43 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 26-04-2009, 04:22 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mabel - 26-04-2009, 04:35 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 27-04-2009, 02:41 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 27-04-2009, 07:38 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 28-04-2009, 06:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 28-04-2009, 06:26 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Isis-Zeita iubirii - 29-04-2009, 07:41 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 29-04-2009, 08:33 PM


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