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Kaleido star sora and leon

#17
Bine pustoaic-o!Mult mai bine.Mai ai unele greseli de exprimare...de tastare,dar totul se rezolva.cum ti-am spus si pe mess....evita expresia "s-a sculat".Foloseste "s-a ridicat".Mai avem de lucrat la un lucru foarte important...repeti anumite cuvinte de prea multe ori.Oricum...sunt multumita de ce a iesit aici.Astept continuarea!Ja ne si pupici!
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My sin is Pride.
I'm on my highway to Hell!
Yuki is my kamy-sama. So...Shut the f*** up!
Criticii nu-i pot ranii pe creatori decta cu permisiunea acestora.


You tried to hold me under, I held my breath
Alone and now you wonder, what I possess
Nothing you can say , nothing's gonna change what you've done to me
Now it's time to shine, I'm gonna take what's mine
While you're burning inside my light






Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 18-11-2007, 01:24 AM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Lye - 18-11-2007, 05:35 AM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 18-11-2007, 05:04 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Lye - 19-11-2007, 03:52 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 27-11-2007, 10:47 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Lye - 27-11-2007, 11:20 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 29-11-2007, 06:17 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Lye - 30-11-2007, 03:48 AM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 30-11-2007, 01:28 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Lye - 30-11-2007, 04:36 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 30-11-2007, 05:19 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 01-12-2007, 01:28 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Lye - 13-12-2007, 01:13 AM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 15-12-2007, 12:01 AM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Lye - 15-12-2007, 12:52 AM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 15-12-2007, 10:56 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Lye - 15-12-2007, 11:44 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 17-12-2007, 12:00 AM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 27-12-2007, 12:51 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Lye - 29-12-2007, 02:04 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 04-01-2008, 01:31 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de .::Mariko Emina::. - 04-01-2008, 02:58 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 04-01-2008, 09:31 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Lye - 05-01-2008, 05:52 AM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 12-01-2008, 07:31 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 20-01-2008, 10:26 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 02-02-2008, 08:53 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 15-02-2008, 08:16 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 24-02-2008, 06:05 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 09-07-2008, 03:47 PM
RE: Kaleido star sora and leon - de Yukira1234 - 13-07-2008, 11:01 PM

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