28-10-2012, 12:36 AM
Disclaimer: nu detin niciun drept asupra personajelor din beyblade.
Oc's
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Name: Ash
Gender: male
Age: 17 (turns to 18)
Family: brother Kyoya
Friends: Deea, Gingka, Yuu, Tsubasa, Madoka
Rivals: Damien, Jack, Zeo, Tobi, Masamune
Enemies: Sigurat, Ryuuga
Bey: Counter Leone and an Earth Eagle (rarely used)
Personallity: calm, kind and wise, but cand be the opposite if you get into his nerves. also likes to stay lonely since he didn't have lots of friends.
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Name: Deea
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Family: -none-
Friends: Ash, Kyoya, Gingka, Yuu, Tsubasa, Madoka,Masamune, Zeo, Damien, Jack, Toby
Rivals: Team Excalibur
Enemies: Sigurat
Bey: Inferno Kerbecs
Personallity: clam, misteryous, a little bit dark, in battle she loses the control and makes everything to win.
Chapter 1
Ash P.O.V.
Normal days, boring days. Why don't we have some action in that boring city?
Stop croaking and do some usefull things!
And what exactly you call "usefull things"? I said while rolling my eyes.
I don't know, just stop croaking!
After few minutes of silence I opend my mounth again:
Wanna take a battle, bro?
A battle you say? You wanna loose again little bro? He said with a sarcastic smile.
Better shut up and fight to see who will really loose!
Who do you say to sh- I intrerupted him.
Shut up and come! And we both ran to a bey stadium near our home.
Ready to loose?
Don't be so sure! I said while putting my bey on the launcher. Let's go!
3
2
1
LET IT RIP!!
In the next second our beys were fighting to the death. My Counter Leone and my brother's Fang Leone were hitting eachother with full amount of force, when...
LEONE!! LION GALE FORCE WALL!!
Too fast brother!
Huh?
Leone, Lion Fang Tornado!!
What the heck?! Leone!! Finish this now!!
Fang Leone and Counter Leone were shoting even with parts from the arena and when the battle was the most awesome, they appeared. A golden bey falled from the sky into the stadium and flew our beys outta it. Then the golden bey that actualli was an Inferno Kerbecs returns to his owner up to us into a helicopter.
How funny! Two brothers fighting! Let's make that fight more intresting! Deea!
Sigurat! We both yelled.
Surprised to see me, hah? No problem, it seems like this you last day of living in that world!
WHAT?!?!
Deea show them your power!
A girl with white hair shows herself out the helicopter. It seems like she was the owner of that Kerbecs.
I'll leave them in your hands! Don't dissapoint me and your friends! Goodbye!
Wait!! Where are you going coward!!
I'm your opponent now! The girl said.
Fine, I will fight you!
No brother, I'm gonna take this challange!
In a moment like that wasn't time for arguing so he let me fight with that girl called Deea.
You wanna fight kid? Allright, let's see how stronger you are!
You really don't want to know!
Oh, but I really want!
3
2
1
LET IT RIP!!
Go Leone!!
Come one Kerbecs!! Rip his head off! Inferno Blast!!
Leone!! Lion Fang Tornado!!
The beys were spinning and spinning and shoting eachother, but something was wrong, Kerbecs was spinning with full force even if I attacked him very hard.
What's wrong Leone?! Do it! End this fight!!
Don't be so hurry my friend! We allready started, but if you want an end, then that's what I will do! Kerbecs!!
Kerbecs was hitting Leone very hard. Even Leone can't keep this too much longer so I had to do something. I can't loose that fight!
Leone!! Let the wind bring you upper and upper!!
What is he gonna do? Oh, I get it, copying me little brotha' ?!
That's right!! Now Leone!!! King Lion Reverse Wind Strike!!
What's going on?! Kerbeeecs!!!
A big cloud of smoke was covering the stadium, but in the end we cand saw that Leone was still spinning and Kerbecs was stoped from minutes ago.
I-I-I I can't belive I loosed in front of one like you! she said very angrily.
Don't be so sad, it was just a fight! I loosed lots in front of my brother!
Huh?
Why you like with them? I mean Sigurat and the others?
I-I-I don't know...
I helped her to get up and she looks pretty bad.
Come with us!
What? R-r-really?
Yeah! We'll be happy to have a new friend whit us! By the way, I think I and brother can share a room, right brother?
WHAT?! YOU LITTLE BRAT!! He said and started to follow me while I was running in cycles.
Na na na na na! You can't catch me!
KID!!!
I can saw that Deea was smiling. I think she will feel better now that she's with us and not whit that stincky jerk, Sigurat. And about me, when I was catched by my bro I've got some good nudges into my head -_-, but at last I surveved!
Oc's
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Name: Ash
Gender: male
Age: 17 (turns to 18)
Family: brother Kyoya
Friends: Deea, Gingka, Yuu, Tsubasa, Madoka
Rivals: Damien, Jack, Zeo, Tobi, Masamune
Enemies: Sigurat, Ryuuga
Bey: Counter Leone and an Earth Eagle (rarely used)
Personallity: calm, kind and wise, but cand be the opposite if you get into his nerves. also likes to stay lonely since he didn't have lots of friends.
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Name: Deea
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Family: -none-
Friends: Ash, Kyoya, Gingka, Yuu, Tsubasa, Madoka,Masamune, Zeo, Damien, Jack, Toby
Rivals: Team Excalibur
Enemies: Sigurat
Bey: Inferno Kerbecs
Personallity: clam, misteryous, a little bit dark, in battle she loses the control and makes everything to win.
Chapter 1
Ash P.O.V.
Normal days, boring days. Why don't we have some action in that boring city?
Stop croaking and do some usefull things!
And what exactly you call "usefull things"? I said while rolling my eyes.
I don't know, just stop croaking!
After few minutes of silence I opend my mounth again:
Wanna take a battle, bro?
A battle you say? You wanna loose again little bro? He said with a sarcastic smile.
Better shut up and fight to see who will really loose!
Who do you say to sh- I intrerupted him.
Shut up and come! And we both ran to a bey stadium near our home.
Ready to loose?
Don't be so sure! I said while putting my bey on the launcher. Let's go!
3
2
1
LET IT RIP!!
In the next second our beys were fighting to the death. My Counter Leone and my brother's Fang Leone were hitting eachother with full amount of force, when...
LEONE!! LION GALE FORCE WALL!!
Too fast brother!
Huh?
Leone, Lion Fang Tornado!!
What the heck?! Leone!! Finish this now!!
Fang Leone and Counter Leone were shoting even with parts from the arena and when the battle was the most awesome, they appeared. A golden bey falled from the sky into the stadium and flew our beys outta it. Then the golden bey that actualli was an Inferno Kerbecs returns to his owner up to us into a helicopter.
How funny! Two brothers fighting! Let's make that fight more intresting! Deea!
Sigurat! We both yelled.
Surprised to see me, hah? No problem, it seems like this you last day of living in that world!
WHAT?!?!
Deea show them your power!
A girl with white hair shows herself out the helicopter. It seems like she was the owner of that Kerbecs.
I'll leave them in your hands! Don't dissapoint me and your friends! Goodbye!
Wait!! Where are you going coward!!
I'm your opponent now! The girl said.
Fine, I will fight you!
No brother, I'm gonna take this challange!
In a moment like that wasn't time for arguing so he let me fight with that girl called Deea.
You wanna fight kid? Allright, let's see how stronger you are!
You really don't want to know!
Oh, but I really want!
3
2
1
LET IT RIP!!
Go Leone!!
Come one Kerbecs!! Rip his head off! Inferno Blast!!
Leone!! Lion Fang Tornado!!
The beys were spinning and spinning and shoting eachother, but something was wrong, Kerbecs was spinning with full force even if I attacked him very hard.
What's wrong Leone?! Do it! End this fight!!
Don't be so hurry my friend! We allready started, but if you want an end, then that's what I will do! Kerbecs!!
Kerbecs was hitting Leone very hard. Even Leone can't keep this too much longer so I had to do something. I can't loose that fight!
Leone!! Let the wind bring you upper and upper!!
What is he gonna do? Oh, I get it, copying me little brotha' ?!
That's right!! Now Leone!!! King Lion Reverse Wind Strike!!
What's going on?! Kerbeeecs!!!
A big cloud of smoke was covering the stadium, but in the end we cand saw that Leone was still spinning and Kerbecs was stoped from minutes ago.
I-I-I I can't belive I loosed in front of one like you! she said very angrily.
Don't be so sad, it was just a fight! I loosed lots in front of my brother!
Huh?
Why you like with them? I mean Sigurat and the others?
I-I-I don't know...
I helped her to get up and she looks pretty bad.
Come with us!
What? R-r-really?
Yeah! We'll be happy to have a new friend whit us! By the way, I think I and brother can share a room, right brother?
WHAT?! YOU LITTLE BRAT!! He said and started to follow me while I was running in cycles.
Na na na na na! You can't catch me!
KID!!!
I can saw that Deea was smiling. I think she will feel better now that she's with us and not whit that stincky jerk, Sigurat. And about me, when I was catched by my bro I've got some good nudges into my head -_-, but at last I surveved!
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