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Because we are rebels!

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Hey ^.^ Scuze că nu ţi-am comentat continuarea mai devreme dar lenea mea este mult prea mare >,< .
Well ... îmi place la nebunie ficul . Titlul cred că ma atras cel mai mult :-? Nu stiu dacă ţi-am mai dat comentarii la fic sau dacă am mai spus chestia cu titlul dar in fine . Am ramas uimită cand ţi-am citit nextu' , este uimitor dar acum serios următorul capitol cand îl mai pui ? Să dăm startu' la adevaratul comentariu :
Descrierea: Este la locul ei . Mă bucur că nu e in vacanta . Am observat că ai din belşug . Descrii sentimentele personajelor , locul în care se află , cred că şi ţinuta ... nu's chiar atat de atentă la chestiile astea .
Naratiunea: îmi place . Este pe aceeasi balanţă cu descrierea .
Dialogul: Nu este sec . Nu ai nici foarte mult dar nici puţin . Este la limită . Bravo !
Actiunea: Grăbită ... :-? neeeh . Nu este fugărită de raţuşte .
Greseli exprimare/tastare: Eh acu-i acu ... am vazut niţele de tastatura ... dar acum nimeni nu e perfect .
Sper să pui mai repede nextu' că eu deja mor [ :=) ] . Well , Chuu & Kiss u :*



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Kiddoxx. - 06-10-2010, 03:52 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Ada - 06-10-2010, 04:56 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de InocentAngel - 06-10-2010, 08:08 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Shadow. - 06-10-2010, 09:14 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Biscu' iz back ^^ - 06-10-2010, 09:40 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Debb.' - 06-10-2010, 09:44 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 06-10-2010, 10:08 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Axel . - 07-10-2010, 06:12 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Kiddoxx. - 08-10-2010, 02:48 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 08-10-2010, 06:52 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Kiddoxx. - 11-10-2010, 03:05 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de ▌▒ Zยzzααα ▒▌ - 16-10-2010, 11:30 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Shadow. - 28-10-2010, 06:36 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 06-11-2010, 10:05 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 11-11-2010, 04:40 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Flash - 12-11-2010, 10:51 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 18-11-2010, 10:13 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 18-11-2010, 10:18 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 19-11-2010, 04:54 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 19-11-2010, 05:54 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Daria - 19-11-2010, 11:29 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 20-11-2010, 06:17 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 20-11-2010, 11:56 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 21-11-2010, 09:52 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 21-11-2010, 12:46 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 22-11-2010, 12:04 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 23-11-2010, 04:13 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 23-11-2010, 07:22 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Dufresne - 23-11-2010, 07:44 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 23-11-2010, 08:35 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 23-11-2010, 08:37 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 23-11-2010, 09:02 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 24-11-2010, 11:20 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Lilishor - 26-11-2010, 08:13 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 26-11-2010, 08:26 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 14-12-2010, 11:44 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Yun. - 14-12-2010, 04:29 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 14-12-2010, 08:36 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Daria - 16-12-2010, 12:14 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Dufresne - 16-12-2010, 03:52 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 17-12-2010, 04:37 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 21-12-2010, 10:09 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 28-12-2010, 12:15 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de crisy_bby - 28-12-2010, 01:00 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Mariah . - 28-12-2010, 01:45 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 02-01-2011, 01:55 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 17-01-2011, 07:14 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Mariah . - 17-01-2011, 08:53 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 17-01-2011, 11:27 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Zuzy Is Angell - 19-01-2011, 01:19 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de _Andreea_ - 19-01-2011, 05:31 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Too Many Dreams. - 19-01-2011, 10:08 PM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Moon princess - 20-01-2011, 12:46 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Daria - 23-01-2011, 12:43 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de KarinaD - 14-02-2011, 12:25 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de Rose ^^ - 14-04-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: Because we are rebels! - de KiDda - 18-04-2011, 11:20 PM


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