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Neata! Am citit de aseara, insa nu am mai putut lasa com fiindca am fost foarte obosita, dar am reusit sa citesc. :))
Nu prea am ce mare lucru sa spun. Mi-a placut capitolul, dar parca nu mi-a ajuns. Centrul a tot capitolul s-a invartit asupra unei singure idei, care consider ca ar fi mers ceva mai dezvoltata cat si adaugarea unor noi idei. Pentru ca mi s-a parut simpla intr-un final.
Ok, modul in care ai povestit mi-a placut, la asta nu am ce comenta, eu doar m-am referit la idea capitolului si la actiune.
Imi place ca scrii la pers. a-III-a, nu am mai citit nici un fic de la tine la persoana a-III-a, Gabi. Ceea ce ma bucura enorm. :x Deci te descurci foarte bine.
Da, da... laude. :))
Sunt curioasa ce se va petrece cu Zack, prin urmare astept nextul.



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Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 10-09-2011, 10:12 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de MiraA - 10-09-2011, 10:28 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Zyklon - 11-09-2011, 03:19 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 11-09-2011, 09:28 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de dot dot curve :) - 19-09-2011, 06:33 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Beatrix LaVey - 22-09-2011, 11:18 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de hiimera - 23-09-2011, 09:14 AM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de dot dot curve :) - 01-10-2011, 06:14 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Beatrix LaVey - 06-10-2011, 10:38 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de dot dot curve :) - 07-10-2011, 06:15 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de alexutzy97 - 07-10-2011, 09:30 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de hiimera - 08-10-2011, 12:10 AM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de MiraA - 08-10-2011, 08:35 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Beatrix LaVey - 13-10-2011, 08:23 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de hiimera - 13-10-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Deeh - 13-10-2011, 10:07 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de dot dot curve :) - 14-10-2011, 11:22 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Rain - 19-10-2011, 11:17 AM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de MiraA - 19-10-2011, 11:13 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Beatrix LaVey - 31-10-2011, 04:41 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Deeh - 31-10-2011, 08:12 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de MiraA - 04-11-2011, 08:38 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de hiimera - 05-11-2011, 01:00 PM
RE: Alpha Boy [yaoi] - de Beatrix LaVey - 25-11-2011, 08:41 PM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de MiraA - 08-12-2011, 08:09 PM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 09-12-2011, 03:18 PM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Rain - 12-12-2011, 12:22 AM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 16-12-2011, 11:58 PM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de dot dot curve :) - 17-12-2011, 03:03 PM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 20-12-2011, 10:50 PM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 26-12-2011, 04:49 PM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de dot dot curve :) - 26-12-2011, 06:19 PM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Rain - 28-12-2011, 05:58 PM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 06-01-2012, 10:28 PM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Rain - 06-01-2012, 10:35 PM
RE: [yaoi] Alpha Boy - de Blue. - 08-01-2012, 06:02 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Pคnđค. - 09-01-2012, 06:17 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de MiraA - 17-01-2012, 02:00 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 31-01-2012, 10:56 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 31-01-2012, 11:38 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de AbiiShu' - 01-02-2012, 03:34 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Rain - 01-02-2012, 10:12 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Pคnđค. - 02-02-2012, 07:38 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de MiraA - 04-02-2012, 12:43 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 11-03-2012, 04:23 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 11-03-2012, 12:20 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Rain - 04-04-2012, 05:35 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 08-04-2012, 12:44 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 08-04-2012, 10:46 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Rain - 11-04-2012, 06:33 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 04-05-2012, 10:35 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Alixa - 06-05-2012, 03:07 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 12-05-2012, 11:55 PM
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RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 03-06-2012, 02:17 AM
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RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 18-06-2012, 09:56 PM
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RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 03-07-2012, 12:46 AM
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RE: Alpha Boy - de Lexxu - 03-07-2012, 08:17 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 03-07-2012, 11:42 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 15-07-2012, 02:31 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Lexxu - 15-07-2012, 02:52 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 15-07-2012, 10:09 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 01-08-2012, 01:34 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 01-08-2012, 10:00 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Lexxu - 01-08-2012, 10:56 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Justine - 27-08-2012, 08:44 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 14-09-2012, 12:10 AM
RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 14-09-2012, 01:32 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Justine - 15-09-2012, 02:01 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 11-10-2012, 10:36 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de hiimera - 12-10-2012, 05:18 PM
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RE: Alpha Boy - de Beatrix LaVey - 12-02-2013, 06:19 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de FuNnY bUnNy - 10-03-2013, 06:03 PM
RE: Alpha Boy - de ohaio_angel - 15-03-2013, 09:25 PM
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