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A picture of you

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În sfarşit ati venit cu nextul. Aleluia!! Scumpa mea Mira, cât de mult îmi place cum scrii. : x Cred că ştii asta deja, nu? Oricum, la fel ca şi partenera ta, trebuia mai mult descris. Sunt douar 2 idei secundare aici scoase din ideea principală.
Sfat: încearcă să combini mai multe idei într-un singur capitol, fiindcă aşa iese mai lung.
Sau încearcă să ramifici propozitiile cu multă descriere, pentru a îmbogăţii continutul.
A fost simplu, dar bun, mi-a placut.
Ideea lui Sky mă încântă foarte mult. ;; ) Abia aştept să vad ce are să urmeze, poate vor fi şcene amoroase între cei doi pe acolo. Apa aia caldă face multe minuni!! xD

Fetelor nu prea am multe de spus, îmi place şi vreau să citesc în continuare. : x



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A picture of you - de MiraA - 22-04-2011, 09:59 PM
RE: A picture of you [YAOI +18 by Gaby and MiraA - de hiimera - 06-11-2011, 12:31 AM
RE: [yaoi] A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 10-12-2011, 10:47 PM
RE: [yaoi] A picture of you - de hiimera - 15-12-2011, 02:00 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 10-01-2012, 08:28 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 12-01-2012, 07:55 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Rain - 15-01-2012, 04:28 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Sushi - 11-02-2012, 01:27 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 23-02-2012, 01:49 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Lexxu - 23-02-2012, 07:12 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 23-02-2012, 09:25 PM
RE: A picture of you - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 23-02-2012, 10:15 PM
RE: A picture of you - de AbiiShu' - 24-02-2012, 06:26 PM
RE: A picture of you - de rali2009 - 25-02-2012, 12:29 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Blue. - 25-02-2012, 05:13 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Rain - 25-02-2012, 11:06 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Sushi - 03-03-2012, 11:28 PM
RE: A picture of you - de DiZ - 10-06-2012, 10:26 AM
RE: A picture of you - de MiraA - 10-06-2012, 09:39 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 10-06-2012, 10:06 PM
RE: A picture of you - de AbiiShu' - 11-06-2012, 11:11 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Ciquita - 11-06-2012, 03:48 PM
RE: A picture of you - de kame. - 12-06-2012, 08:48 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Rain - 15-06-2012, 08:00 PM
RE: A picture of you - de ArtieS - 15-06-2012, 11:45 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 15-07-2012, 02:46 PM
RE: A picture of you - de kame. - 15-07-2012, 07:47 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 15-07-2012, 08:13 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Sushi - 15-07-2012, 09:41 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Rain - 19-07-2012, 05:28 PM
RE: A picture of you - de MiraA - 23-07-2012, 12:07 AM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 23-07-2012, 09:05 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Lexxu - 23-07-2012, 10:12 AM
RE: A picture of you - de kyra_kyralyne - 24-07-2012, 04:06 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 12-08-2012, 12:42 PM
RE: A picture of you - de AbiiShu' - 12-08-2012, 09:17 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 20-08-2012, 10:05 AM
RE: A picture of you - de MiraA - 15-09-2012, 10:40 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 15-09-2012, 11:36 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Lexxu - 16-09-2012, 12:29 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 11-10-2012, 10:20 PM
RE: A picture of you - de RosetteFoxy - 12-10-2012, 08:08 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 13-10-2012, 08:01 PM
RE: A picture of you - de MiraA - 25-10-2012, 06:44 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 25-10-2012, 08:54 PM
RE: A picture of you - de kame. - 25-10-2012, 09:02 PM
RE: A picture of you - de FuNnY bUnNy - 26-10-2012, 01:39 PM
RE: A picture of you - de RosetteFoxy - 27-10-2012, 06:00 PM
RE: A picture of you - de alice extreme - 01-12-2012, 08:03 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Elyy - 03-12-2012, 08:33 PM
RE: A picture of you - de caramele cu pedale - 07-12-2012, 09:39 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 03-01-2013, 12:53 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Marina. - 09-01-2013, 03:20 AM
RE: A picture of you - de FuNnY bUnNy - 09-01-2013, 09:37 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Natsuru - 11-01-2013, 02:08 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 12-02-2013, 06:27 PM
RE: A picture of you - de FuNnY bUnNy - 15-02-2013, 06:40 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Michee - 17-02-2013, 08:03 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Dream_great - 21-02-2013, 04:10 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Dream_great - 26-02-2013, 11:10 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Marina. - 23-03-2013, 02:52 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Kira's Scarlet - 31-03-2013, 08:12 PM
RE: A picture of you - de mko_darkangel - 26-05-2013, 11:04 AM

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