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[Terminat] I just wanna love you!

MiraA, draga mea, am citit acest capitol cu atata suspans cum nu am mai facut cu niciunul altul. Iti ador ideile si, cand stau putin sa ma gandesc cum a inceput ficul, nu as fi crezut niciodata ca va ajunge la o asemenea poveste plina de actiune si mister. As citit intr-una carti si ficuri de genul asta, pentru ca imi place sa traiesc aceste sentimente de frica, exact cum le-a simtit si Blake.
La inceput doar mi-am trecut ochii peste acest capitol, apoi, cand am dat de niste replici care erau mai mult ca evidente ca Jesse va muri, crede-ma, nu imi mai venea sa citesc. Nu voiam sa aflu cum o va face, insa, cu chiu cu vai m-am apucat sa citesc randurile. Inca mai simt acele emotii pentru ca nici acum, la sfarsitul capitolului nu mi-am dat exact seama ce s-a intamplat cu adevarat.
Intr-adevar ai descris bine, insa nu pot accepta cat de torturat a fost Jesse acolo. A murit? Te rog spune-mi ca gandul lui Jesse ca doctorul va ajunge tarziu e doar imaginatia lui, si ca Blake chiar va fi acolo la timp.
Nici acum nu inteleg de ce a plecat, chair nu inteleg. Il putea lasa pe Malone ala sa moara linistit acolo si sa isi ia scumpul iubit in brate si sa plece. Sarutul acela, chiar daca a fost scurt, cred ca a fost cel mai bun pana acum... Nu stiu de ce, nu a fost descris prea mult, insa trecuse atata timp de cand nu si-au mai simtit buzele moi 46
Vreau doar ca Jesse sa fie bine si Blake sa ii trateze ranile si sa ii poata povesti ce s-a intamplat defapt cu Issabela, ca i-a placut cartea, ca il iubeste, ca i-a fost dor de el... etc. Ai putea face astea? :3


Acum imi ramane decat sa astept urmatorul capitol. Nu stiu daca te apropi de sfarsit sau nu, dar vreau ca in next sa se intample ceva frumos, ca cei doi sa fie bine ^^ Si sa se iubeasca mai mult ca la inceput. Bafta sweety hug



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[Terminat] I just wanna love you! - de MiraA - 03-11-2010, 05:23 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! - de yaoi maniac - 03-11-2010, 06:04 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! - de NecroToXyK - 03-11-2010, 06:10 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! - de MiraA - 04-11-2010, 12:17 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! - de NecroToXyK - 04-11-2010, 12:38 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! - de MiraA - 12-11-2010, 11:40 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 23-11-2010, 10:56 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 08-12-2010, 10:32 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 16-12-2010, 06:10 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 28-12-2010, 01:07 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 31-12-2010, 04:23 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 03-01-2011, 10:51 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 04-01-2011, 11:07 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 10-01-2011, 07:20 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 19-01-2011, 10:23 PM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 21-01-2011, 11:32 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 28-01-2011, 08:36 PM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 02-02-2011, 04:05 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 06-02-2011, 02:36 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 06-02-2011, 10:45 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 10-02-2011, 11:18 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 19-02-2011, 12:09 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 19-02-2011, 12:30 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 24-02-2011, 11:17 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 01-03-2011, 10:40 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 06-03-2011, 11:29 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 07-03-2011, 12:08 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 09-03-2011, 10:46 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 09-03-2011, 11:42 PM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 14-03-2011, 09:25 PM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 10-04-2011, 09:47 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 11-04-2011, 10:08 AM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Sasha. - 11-04-2011, 08:16 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 17-04-2011, 10:01 PM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 14-05-2011, 05:08 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Rain - 14-05-2011, 05:38 PM
RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de Addeh - 15-05-2011, 10:29 AM
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RE: I just wanna love you! [yaoi +18] - de MiraA - 28-05-2011, 10:32 AM
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