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We will still be friends forever despite difficulties

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well, i`am first! ;;) and... i can say that.... acest capitol a fost briliant :X >:D<
iubire, chiar mi`a placut acest capitol si sincer nu am fost prea atenta daca ai greseli de tastare>.>

Ai avut descriere ceea ce ma incanta la maXim;)) Naratiunea a fos in regula, ca intotdeauna deci nu am ce comenta, iar actiunea nu mi s`a parut grabita deci iata un + pentru tine^^
Dialogul nu a fost prezent deci nu am ce comenta la el^.^

uff, atat de frumos ai descris sentimentele Sakurei fata de Gaara incat m`a apucat bocitu` pe-aici^^

sper ca si urmatoru` capitol sa fie la fel de frumos si sa nu uitati sa ma anuntati;))
*Z`bYe*>:D<



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 31-12-2010, 01:54 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 02-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 04-01-2011, 04:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 09-01-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 13-01-2011, 10:05 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 14-01-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 22-01-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 23-01-2011, 07:56 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de Mariah . - 27-01-2011, 03:25 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 29-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 30-01-2011, 08:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 05-02-2011, 11:14 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 06-02-2011, 11:42 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 11-02-2011, 11:16 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 20-02-2011, 10:54 PM

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